Recent Comments

xORRiNx
6/5/16, 4:43 AM
Just submitted part 3. It'll get approved soon hopefully!
Anonymous
6/5/16, 4:39 AM
This was a great story. It would be brilliant if you could do a third season Texmandex, and maybe make it a trilogy. I'm guessing Aaron is Chris' assistant but it would be fun to see how it all plays out as I'm assuming you have your own ideas on that or at least had your own ideas on it when you wrote it.
Darmani
6/5/16, 4:20 AM
Glad to have you back. this is concluded. you do sequences of transition well. As well as the incest. Only negative is the setup exposition but we're WELL on the way to tense implication and action as things go on. Only complaints is wanting more (when they leave, go shopping, or whatever) but what is there works. thank you.
Anonymous
6/5/16, 3:51 AM
I'd love to see a continuation of this. The lockdown takes place after school, so even if they convert everyone then there's still a lot of room to go around with the cult spreading. New POVs could come from jocks who missed practice that night, nerds studying late, all kinds of people. In the following days, maybe some people start to notice the hot new fashion trend and wonder or find spandex hanging in their lockers. What happens when the converted team has a game with another school? Or there's a new transfer student? How does the cult work on people who already wear spandex for sports? And I agree with Spandexlad's suggestions too.
Anonymous
6/5/16, 3:34 AM
Good story!!
Anonymous
6/5/16, 3:04 AM
I love this Age progression!!
Anonymous
6/5/16, 2:55 AM
Loved the part when jack shit what was left of his human shelf Keep writing please
Ink_Nerd
6/5/16, 2:54 AM
hope there is more coming form this story. ether more of David and Ben, or even better more storys of customers that come for a trim from Trace.
6/5/16, 2:07 AM
Me he encantado esta historia hasta aquí. Las descripciones son bellas, y el desarrollo del argumento tuvo buen ritmo. No tengo quejas, solo que te disfrutes de escribir tanto que nosotros disfrutamos de leer!
Tox
6/5/16, 12:46 AM
There, I put my handle in for this comment (my first one for this story). This story, and just, all of them so far Orrins, you have quickly added yourself to my favorite authors on here. Not only are your stories well written, but even the ones that are intentionally vague like this one spark the imagination. Your imagery is very vivid and it's quite easy for me to just get lost in it. Love your work, simply cannot wait for more! :)