Recent Comments

Ponko
6/5/16, 6:10 AM
This is getting better and better with each chapter! i love the subtle changes, and I love to see Ty's deterioration in the bathroom. Too bad that my financial situation isn't good enough to ask you for a story. You are so talented!
Anonymous
6/5/16, 5:24 AM
Yeah!
Texmandex
6/5/16, 4:47 AM
I will definitely continue the story. Stay tuned. Thanks guys.
xORRiNx
6/5/16, 4:43 AM
Just submitted part 3. It'll get approved soon hopefully!
Anonymous
6/5/16, 4:39 AM
This was a great story. It would be brilliant if you could do a third season Texmandex, and maybe make it a trilogy. I'm guessing Aaron is Chris' assistant but it would be fun to see how it all plays out as I'm assuming you have your own ideas on that or at least had your own ideas on it when you wrote it.
Darmani
6/5/16, 4:20 AM
Glad to have you back. this is concluded. you do sequences of transition well. As well as the incest. Only negative is the setup exposition but we're WELL on the way to tense implication and action as things go on. Only complaints is wanting more (when they leave, go shopping, or whatever) but what is there works. thank you.
Anonymous
6/5/16, 3:51 AM
I'd love to see a continuation of this. The lockdown takes place after school, so even if they convert everyone then there's still a lot of room to go around with the cult spreading. New POVs could come from jocks who missed practice that night, nerds studying late, all kinds of people. In the following days, maybe some people start to notice the hot new fashion trend and wonder or find spandex hanging in their lockers. What happens when the converted team has a game with another school? Or there's a new transfer student? How does the cult work on people who already wear spandex for sports? And I agree with Spandexlad's suggestions too.
Anonymous
6/5/16, 3:34 AM
Good story!!
Anonymous
6/5/16, 3:04 AM
I love this Age progression!!
Anonymous
6/5/16, 2:55 AM
Loved the part when jack shit what was left of his human shelf Keep writing please