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Jun 4, 2016
Anonymous
6/4/16, 10:01 PM
Another absolutely amazing story. Really one of the best contributing at the moment! Other authors might be able to drum up comments based on controversial topics but your stories are the real deal well written AND sexually satisfying. Well done!
bbfmtok@yahoo.com
6/4/16, 9:02 PM
please continue and change the whole team.
cutlerfan
6/4/16, 8:10 PM
Keep writing this. I would love to read more of Kyle's transformation.
EricJ
6/4/16, 8:03 PM
Matt turning into a dominant rough Alpha was hot. Backfire for Hannah..Makes Matt abusive towards' ----natter natter,yak yak repeat----- 'is submissive role,Matts dominance. THERE...I'VE PUT MY SIGNATURE ON IT,HAPPY NOW :}
xORRiNx
6/4/16, 4:18 PM
Yea I've always found that annoying... Even somebody lile you (Ragnarok) could be writing things with no signature. But I guess as long as at least one person likes my stories I'll be happy :)
Jun 4, 2016
Anonymous
6/4/16, 4:08 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
6/4/16, 4:00 PM
Substance of the story is interesting. This was a good start. Form of the story -- you've got to spend time editing. Writing the story is creative. Editing the story is crucial. There were hiccups in many of your sentences and paragraphs. If you're using MSWord, use the Spell and Grammar check. It will help.
Anonymous
6/4/16, 3:52 PM
Texmandex since you are the original author, it would be awesome if you could continue the series. This series has long been one of my favorites works esp when I first discovered them on the erotic mind control site years ago. I always wondered what happened after the lockdown. I'd love for you to continue the story!!
bbfmtok@yahoo.com
6/4/16, 2:48 PM
great start cant wait for more ;-)
Jun 4, 2016
Sieg
6/4/16, 2:24 PM
Was an amazing story! I really liked it :))