Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/4/16, 11:15 PM
I really loved this series too and would love to know what happens next after the lockdown. I'm assuming you never carried on with the story texmandex? It would be great if you did so we can find out what happens. I do agree with Spandexlad as well on some of his points about it sometimes being confusing as to whom is on what side. I also find some of the descriptions of the slaves confusing too as sometimes they appear to only be in spandex shorts, yet other times appear to be clad fully in spandex. But I think I can speak for a lot of readers texmandex when I say please do break out that "red pen" as I and many others I'm sure would love to know what happens during that lockdown.
Jun 4, 2016
xORRiNx
6/4/16, 11:05 PM
I've read some memory change themes before but you my friend take the cake with skill. This was written sooo well!!!
Jun 4, 2016
Anonymous
6/4/16, 10:43 PM
So hot!!! More memory change stories, please!
Jun 4, 2016
Anonymous
6/4/16, 10:01 PM
Another absolutely amazing story. Really one of the best contributing at the moment! Other authors might be able to drum up comments based on controversial topics but your stories are the real deal well written AND sexually satisfying. Well done!
bbfmtok@yahoo.com
6/4/16, 9:02 PM
please continue and change the whole team.
cutlerfan
6/4/16, 8:10 PM
Keep writing this. I would love to read more of Kyle's transformation.
EricJ
6/4/16, 8:03 PM
Matt turning into a dominant rough Alpha was hot. Backfire for Hannah..Makes Matt abusive towards' ----natter natter,yak yak repeat----- 'is submissive role,Matts dominance. THERE...I'VE PUT MY SIGNATURE ON IT,HAPPY NOW :}
xORRiNx
6/4/16, 4:18 PM
Yea I've always found that annoying... Even somebody lile you (Ragnarok) could be writing things with no signature. But I guess as long as at least one person likes my stories I'll be happy :)
Jun 4, 2016
Anonymous
6/4/16, 4:08 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
6/4/16, 4:00 PM
Substance of the story is interesting. This was a good start. Form of the story -- you've got to spend time editing. Writing the story is creative. Editing the story is crucial. There were hiccups in many of your sentences and paragraphs. If you're using MSWord, use the Spell and Grammar check. It will help.