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Anonymous
6/3/16, 10:27 PM
Maybe Logan could get the formula then they would be best friends again despite Hannah
Anonymous
6/3/16, 9:18 PM
i want that serum for me... wanna end up like matt but remaining bisex
BoonBoon
6/3/16, 8:05 PM
This could be the start for a new hot series! I love the premise, and Lucky and Woody are in fact interesting characters, would be nice to know more about them, or their relations with other fallen angels (would be cool to explore if there's some sort of professional rivalry, or friendly competition with other inhabitants of the underworld, or even explore their relationship with other heavenly entities or supernatural beings). About the erotic subject, it is very good and I was certainly turned on while I was reading your story, but I would have liked to see Officer Sean's point of view. I would have liked to see how he experiences his degradation from cop to stripper, how his world falls apart, and his feeling about his transformation. I would have loved to know If he feels embarrassment or pride when other men slip small bills into his jockstrap.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 7:04 PM
The story is about a guy getting cursed. There's even man on man sex in it. How is this possibly not a fit for this website? Just because someone doesn't personally like a story doesn't mean it shouldn't be posted here.
xORRiNx
6/3/16, 7:01 PM
^ ^ ^ Let me think about it. I'm working on a BRO chapter right now. When I outline these 'short' series I don't account for sequels but I do see paths forward (as some have mentioned).
Anonymous
6/3/16, 6:56 PM
Nice work, but you haven't done justice to the idea if you plan to stop there. I've been thinking about this story off and on all day and getting hard every time. You definitely should consider a sequel episode. Lots of very hot possibilities. Matt might find that he starts more and more to think about dominating his fag friend, losing interest in his girlfriend when only acting out a dom scene with Logan can make him cum. Logan might discover that he has a capacity for humiliation from a straight bud he never felt before. And if he somehow ended up getting the same serum, I wonder how a homophobia inducing serum would work on him. Man, if you don't write it, I might have to (with your permission) - just to get it out of my head.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 6:40 PM
Hot imagery (esp the picture attached), but there could have been a lot more substance to appeal. The image of the police officer in the gym in compression clothes was hot, but there was nothing else beside that.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 5:57 PM
There is nothing wrong here with this story...it's simply another kind of Sado-Masochism...so my guess is that people into sado-masochism will appreciate it...
xORRiNx
6/3/16, 5:03 PM
THANKS EVERYONE FOR THE FEEDBACK! I'd say between here and the e-mails it's about 50/50 love it/don't like it. I'll say that this is probably the most "out there" theme I'll write. I plan on continuing the BRO series now... followed by my planned race domination theme story after that (gay). My whole thing with this story was... have you ever found a particular homophobe to be hot? I have. Not the homophobe part but the physical part... how they're so "bad" and attractive. I guess I was thinking of a guy in my past when I wrote it. :P
Anonymous
6/3/16, 4:36 PM
If Hannah drank it, would her vagina get bigger?