Recent Comments

Jun 4, 2016
Anonymous
6/4/16, 4:08 PM
Great story!! Loved it!!
Anonymous
6/4/16, 4:00 PM
Substance of the story is interesting. This was a good start. Form of the story -- you've got to spend time editing. Writing the story is creative. Editing the story is crucial. There were hiccups in many of your sentences and paragraphs. If you're using MSWord, use the Spell and Grammar check. It will help.
Anonymous
6/4/16, 3:52 PM
Texmandex since you are the original author, it would be awesome if you could continue the series. This series has long been one of my favorites works esp when I first discovered them on the erotic mind control site years ago. I always wondered what happened after the lockdown. I'd love for you to continue the story!!
bbfmtok@yahoo.com
6/4/16, 2:48 PM
great start cant wait for more ;-)
Jun 4, 2016
Sieg
6/4/16, 2:24 PM
Was an amazing story! I really liked it :))
Anonymous
6/4/16, 2:16 PM
Great story. (Also, side note, really appreciate the brawl reference as a wanna be pro smash 4 player)
Ragnarok
6/4/16, 2:16 PM
Yeah. There may be a lot of responses, but soo very many of them are anonymous. Which makes me wonder how many different people are actually complaining or supporting this story, if they don't have the balls to put their signature to their words.
xORRiNx
6/4/16, 1:35 PM
Looking good to me!!!! :D
Jun 4, 2016
Anonymous
6/4/16, 1:15 PM
i want a sequel so bad this is so good perhaps a backstory to how he could change toms memories
Sieg
6/4/16, 12:59 PM
I like the way this is going (and love smash bros!) Definitely interested in seeing more! :)) Great job!