Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/4/16, 2:16 PM
Great story. (Also, side note, really appreciate the brawl reference as a wanna be pro smash 4 player)
Ragnarok
6/4/16, 2:16 PM
Yeah. There may be a lot of responses, but soo very many of them are anonymous. Which makes me wonder how many different people are actually complaining or supporting this story, if they don't have the balls to put their signature to their words.
xORRiNx
6/4/16, 1:35 PM
Looking good to me!!!! :D
Jun 4, 2016
Anonymous
6/4/16, 1:15 PM
i want a sequel so bad this is so good perhaps a backstory to how he could change toms memories
Sieg
6/4/16, 12:59 PM
I like the way this is going (and love smash bros!) Definitely interested in seeing more! :)) Great job!
Anonymous
6/4/16, 8:40 AM
It says something about Orrins writing that he can stir up the crowd to get more responses then I have ever seen on any story on this site. Whether you like it or not, "Bravo!"
Anonymous
6/4/16, 6:27 AM
Matt turning into a dominant rough Alpha was hot. Backfire for Hannah..Makes Matt abusive towards her.Matt gets muscle bound,and more aggressive,prefers to get off on fucking gay guys,using and abusing Logan,effectively turning GAY. Logan loves his submissive role,Matts dominance.
Texmandex@gmail.com
6/4/16, 6:06 AM
Spandexlad, I couldn't agree more with you and your suggestions for how I could have made these stories better. In all fairness, I wrote them when I was in college, almost 15 years ago. I thought my manuscripts were long gone; but just last week I found an old CD with both stories. I posted them exactly as I found them. You raise good points about the narrative being cumbersome to read in some places. Maybe one of these days I'll break out my "red pen" and pare both stories down a bit. Honestly, I'm just happy I found both of them. Glad you enjoyed reading them.
Anonymous
6/4/16, 5:17 AM
^^... With some strictly no-homo real-man-on-real-man action on the side. :-)
Anonymous
6/4/16, 5:01 AM
I thought the best consequence and punishment for Hanna was to Matt turn Logan his best jock bro and reestablish a new dumb jock bro friendship with him, which ended up 24/7 hunting girls.