Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/3/16, 6:56 PM
Nice work, but you haven't done justice to the idea if you plan to stop there. I've been thinking about this story off and on all day and getting hard every time. You definitely should consider a sequel episode. Lots of very hot possibilities. Matt might find that he starts more and more to think about dominating his fag friend, losing interest in his girlfriend when only acting out a dom scene with Logan can make him cum. Logan might discover that he has a capacity for humiliation from a straight bud he never felt before. And if he somehow ended up getting the same serum, I wonder how a homophobia inducing serum would work on him. Man, if you don't write it, I might have to (with your permission) - just to get it out of my head.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 6:40 PM
Hot imagery (esp the picture attached), but there could have been a lot more substance to appeal. The image of the police officer in the gym in compression clothes was hot, but there was nothing else beside that.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 5:57 PM
There is nothing wrong here with this story...it's simply another kind of Sado-Masochism...so my guess is that people into sado-masochism will appreciate it...
xORRiNx
6/3/16, 5:03 PM
THANKS EVERYONE FOR THE FEEDBACK! I'd say between here and the e-mails it's about 50/50 love it/don't like it. I'll say that this is probably the most "out there" theme I'll write. I plan on continuing the BRO series now... followed by my planned race domination theme story after that (gay). My whole thing with this story was... have you ever found a particular homophobe to be hot? I have. Not the homophobe part but the physical part... how they're so "bad" and attractive. I guess I was thinking of a guy in my past when I wrote it. :P
Anonymous
6/3/16, 4:36 PM
If Hannah drank it, would her vagina get bigger?
6/3/16, 4:22 PM
Well written, as usual, and brimming with potential for a sequel. (Logan is entirely aware something unnatural went on, Hannah may have gotten more than she wished and what exactly is her dad's secret?)
Anonymous
6/3/16, 4:18 PM
Would have been better if Logan was actually into rough homophobes and Matt started using him.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 3:44 PM
New chapter please!!!
Anonymous
6/3/16, 3:05 PM
Sequel idea: Logan gets a serum that makes Hannah a lesbian as revenge.
Anonymous
6/3/16, 2:56 PM
maybe someone gave orrin this serum XD