Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/2/16, 8:13 AM
¡Esta historia va muy bien! Me intriga saber qué pasará en el próxico capítulo. Me gustaría que el hijo tuviera algún encuentro con el inspector antes de llegar a casa, asi tendría sentido que no rechazara los cambios en su padre.
Anonymous
6/2/16, 8:11 AM
WOW! Man, I'm anxious to know what are those new clothes and how unmanly Damion would become!
6/2/16, 7:51 AM
Hey guys! Sorry, I haven't checked in here in a while, but I'm here now. :) As Edlam said, the seventh chapter is over at mcstories.com. I stopped posting here when it was in transition from NCMC and I wasn't really sure what was going on. Looks like the site is really shaping up, so I'll be posting to both MC Stories and Gay Spiral Stories from now on, including the missing chapter 7. As you may or may not know from comments on the old NCMC site, I'm chronically ill, so my writing tends to be very sporadic. Nevertheless, I'm just about done Chapter 8 and then I'll send it to my proofreaders. Once they've gone over it, and I've given it a final read-through, I'll be posting it. I don't expect it'll be more than a couple of weeks at most before you see it.
UchihaDEMS
6/2/16, 4:42 AM
Me encantó! En especial la parte del pie. Quiero ver a donde va a llegar. Si quieres una sugerencia, ademas del hijo podrías agregar al entrenador quiza y convencerlo que, para hacerlo mejorar en su desempeño debe darle placer a él y a su padre (y a sus pies, claro) o algo asi. Como sea, tu sigue adelante que vas por muy buen camino!
Anonymous
6/2/16, 4:19 AM
fucking amazing. pls keep writing.
Anonymous
6/2/16, 2:32 AM
This is a great story. Interesting plot, and really cool devices for the transformations. The twists in the spell that drove the transformation were really hot. And I loved how you described the changes...contrasting William with the guys around him during the transformation process. Great job! I hope we see more from you soon.
Anonymous
6/2/16, 2:17 AM
To bad this never continued
Tattcub
6/2/16, 12:17 AM
Go at your own pace. As far as the type of changes are concerned. Variety is the spice of life as the saying goes. Liking your writing.
Cris Kane
6/1/16, 11:53 PM
^^ This is my favorite comment.
Anonymous
6/1/16, 11:18 PM
ENJOYING THE STORY..ONLY WISH THE SON HAD BEEN KEPT IN THE DARK AS THE TRANSFORMATION PROGRESSED....IT'S ALWAYS HOTTER IF, EVEN THOUGH THEY TRY TO FIGHT-IT,THEY CAN'T...WISH BOTH THE FATHER & SON, COULDN'T EXPLAIN WHAT WAS HAPPENING TO THEM,[ALTHOUGH THE READER KNEW FROM 'HEARING' THE TAPES, THEY COULDN'T HEAR].....