Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/1/16, 8:16 PM
Titan, you have a real gift for writing transformation stories, you are my favorite writer!
xORRiNx
6/1/16, 5:54 PM
I really enjoy this story!
Anonymous
6/1/16, 5:10 PM
I, too, have many opinions about how this story should go.
cutlerfan
6/1/16, 5:03 PM
Fast TF is fun but the slow change is more enjoyable by the end. Savoring every little change is great! You write it the way YOu want to. Peace!
xORRiNx
6/1/16, 4:50 PM
^^^ that looks like my outline. Did you hack my computer? Lol. (You did miss a couple major things though) I think everyone should just trust me :) I'm not going to write sex scenes about pussy. I'm gay after all. Hahahaha
Anonymous
6/1/16, 4:09 PM
Awesome! Dark and well written please continue!!
Anonymous
6/1/16, 4:07 PM
I just read part 2 after being intrigued by the premise of a "gay to straight". What a novel idea ! Especially on a site like this where the mental changes become fairly formulaic after a while. Nice, subtle touch with the price comparison shopping almost winning out over the aesthetics of scentless antiperspirant. The socks being left on the floor overnight is the "camel's nose under the tent" in his movement towards being a "regular guy". Next, I'm sure his voice will change, his body language (rapid hand and wrist movements) will change (replaced with whole arm and torso movements) and so it will go.... One thing about the sexuality -- for straight guys, there is a wide range of variation as there is with gay guys. Not all straight dudes talk about "pussy" and grab their crotches. Maybe Ty will be more assertive around his gal pal. Maybe he'll demonstrate his strength and muscles around her!(Horrors!) Maybe he'll bump up against her accidentally while he has an erection, letting her and him both know that he's interested in her in "that way." I'll be interested to see what other subtle "guy mannerisms" that Ty will pick up. Maybe a more masculine name? Tyson? Tyree? "T"? I'm looking forward to further chapters!
Anonymous
6/1/16, 3:12 PM
Dear Author -- Listen to TimNJ. He knows what he's talking about.
Sieg
6/1/16, 1:01 PM
I don't understand the criticism. I thought it was a great chapter, and even the stuff on this site I don't care for, I still applaud people for sharing their work. Especially cause it may be a kink some people are into but rarely see. Keep up the amazing work!
TimNJ
6/1/16, 12:32 PM
I am loving the attention to detail - the Axe moment was very clever! However the pace can seem glacial, which in time, may be deadly. I just hope it is better than your last story, which ended sort of abruptly and unsatisfyingly.