Recent Comments

Anonymous
6/2/16, 3:24 PM
Glad to hear it was your own continuation. I always look forward to your stuff wherever it turns up. You're by far my favorite transformation author. Thanks for the new chapter, and please don't stop.
Anonymous
6/2/16, 3:08 PM
Crazy shit!! Loved it.
Trylithin
6/2/16, 12:37 PM
My stance on this hasn't changed since the Wesley Bracken outrage of years ago, so I'll say the same thing to you that I wanted to say then. xORRiNx, write what turns you on. If you enjoy reading it, then so will other people. This is perfectly within the site's rules, you're perfectly within the right in posting it here, and I'm so, so glad that this archive is becoming more and more varied and diverse. Thank you for posting. Even though some may not be looking forward to the next installment, I know I will be. Keep doing your own thing.
Anonymous
6/2/16, 11:21 AM
Absolutely love your story and the fact that the reality changes to match his changes is very good. It looks like you are going for a growth story...so if I was on the beach then I would wich his pecs and nips to grow to large proportions while he stayed muscular.
Anonymous
6/2/16, 10:42 AM
Hot story but learn to use paragraphs
Anonymous
6/2/16, 8:13 AM
¡Esta historia va muy bien! Me intriga saber qué pasará en el próxico capítulo. Me gustaría que el hijo tuviera algún encuentro con el inspector antes de llegar a casa, asi tendría sentido que no rechazara los cambios en su padre.
Anonymous
6/2/16, 8:11 AM
WOW! Man, I'm anxious to know what are those new clothes and how unmanly Damion would become!
6/2/16, 7:51 AM
Hey guys! Sorry, I haven't checked in here in a while, but I'm here now. :) As Edlam said, the seventh chapter is over at mcstories.com. I stopped posting here when it was in transition from NCMC and I wasn't really sure what was going on. Looks like the site is really shaping up, so I'll be posting to both MC Stories and Gay Spiral Stories from now on, including the missing chapter 7. As you may or may not know from comments on the old NCMC site, I'm chronically ill, so my writing tends to be very sporadic. Nevertheless, I'm just about done Chapter 8 and then I'll send it to my proofreaders. Once they've gone over it, and I've given it a final read-through, I'll be posting it. I don't expect it'll be more than a couple of weeks at most before you see it.
UchihaDEMS
6/2/16, 4:42 AM
Me encantó! En especial la parte del pie. Quiero ver a donde va a llegar. Si quieres una sugerencia, ademas del hijo podrías agregar al entrenador quiza y convencerlo que, para hacerlo mejorar en su desempeño debe darle placer a él y a su padre (y a sus pies, claro) o algo asi. Como sea, tu sigue adelante que vas por muy buen camino!
Anonymous
6/2/16, 4:19 AM
fucking amazing. pls keep writing.