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Mar 19, 2015
ignis
5/28/16, 2:39 PM
Another good idea would be to increase the length of the hypnosis scene. It feels really short and almost instant. Maybe have him try to resist it or maybe just descend slower.
Mar 19, 2015
jaredsmith1998@yahoo.com
5/28/16, 2:34 PM
You may want to work on the wording as it can get very repetetive, maybe merge some sentences. Also, slow down, describe some of the sex scenes some more, because at the pace you're moving at it feels like they're only lasting a few seconds.
Anonymous
5/28/16, 1:59 PM
Has anyone tried emailing either email address to find out?
Anonymous
5/28/16, 1:33 PM
I was wondering the same thing. While I'm always happy to get another chapter of Titan's story, I was surprised to see someone else adding to it. Unless that's him with a new email addy...I'm still hoping he'll continue it himself.
Anonymous
5/28/16, 11:46 AM
Ah! Awesome story. So glad you're back here writing.
alx62
5/28/16, 10:33 AM
were do I sign up for a tanning session?
Anonymous
5/28/16, 9:35 AM
Great story!!! Please keep them coming can't wait for the next instalment :)
SafSG
5/28/16, 8:32 AM
Perfect ending! Thanks alot!
Txz
5/28/16, 6:31 AM
I didn't know this site was like CYOC where anyone could jump in and add a chapter. While the copyright info at the top of the page might not be official, doesn't it mean that Titan owns this story and characters? Shouldn't he be the only one allowed to add chapters?
5/28/16, 6:25 AM
Yes a great story, sequels would be nice, but a prequel would also work - if he is such a good hypnotist, how did he manage to get caught and imprisoned in the first place?