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5/29/16, 4:38 AM
I love the story! The end was short, but that's okay! I like the themes in your work!
xORRiNx
5/29/16, 4:30 AM
Thanks for the comment! Where I went wrong was starting a new story without finishing the old one. I seem to lose interest in the older story because my imagination transfers to the new one. I'm VERY excited to focus on the BRO story for a while. (Although I may occasionally post short single chapter stories randomly.) I hope to have my BRO story take a nice slow detailed route :)
Anonymous
5/29/16, 4:22 AM
Thanks for the story! I appreciate your effort to give us a conclusion, and is great that you've finished the story, instead of abandon it. You are a true professional and a gentleman! Those qualities will bring you far in life. I must confess that I'm sad to see you've lost the interest on it, it was a very promising plot and a very unusual one too. I can't remember to have seen something like that before, it was definitely something new. But I totally understand, that happens when you are a creator, and is perfectly comprehensible. I'll be waiting for your new stories, you are a great writer.
alx62
5/28/16, 11:39 PM
oink oink lucky pig
Mar 19, 2015
ignis
5/28/16, 2:39 PM
Another good idea would be to increase the length of the hypnosis scene. It feels really short and almost instant. Maybe have him try to resist it or maybe just descend slower.
Mar 19, 2015
jaredsmith1998@yahoo.com
5/28/16, 2:34 PM
You may want to work on the wording as it can get very repetetive, maybe merge some sentences. Also, slow down, describe some of the sex scenes some more, because at the pace you're moving at it feels like they're only lasting a few seconds.
Anonymous
5/28/16, 1:59 PM
Has anyone tried emailing either email address to find out?
Anonymous
5/28/16, 1:33 PM
I was wondering the same thing. While I'm always happy to get another chapter of Titan's story, I was surprised to see someone else adding to it. Unless that's him with a new email addy...I'm still hoping he'll continue it himself.
Anonymous
5/28/16, 11:46 AM
Ah! Awesome story. So glad you're back here writing.
alx62
5/28/16, 10:33 AM
were do I sign up for a tanning session?