Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/27/16, 12:38 PM
I suspect that the author's use of stereotypical characteristics and the term "wetback" are intended to convey the victim's - the object of the TF - racist views. That is, the victim is being transformed into his own racist view of what a "wetback" Latino is.
Anonymous
5/27/16, 10:07 AM
Great to see you writing again. Keep em coming
Anonymous
5/27/16, 7:18 AM
Nice! A sequel please.
Anonymous
5/27/16, 6:44 AM
Hope you take this in the way it's intended -- i.e., as a friendly observation: It seems like you might not have any Latino friends, as the description of the Latino "wetback" and other stereotypical characteristics you use might imply a racist slant. Without saying that that is necessarily so, I would suggest being more careful in that regard.
Anonymous
5/27/16, 4:34 AM
Great start! This is headed for some weird shit, I can tell.
Anonymous
5/27/16, 4:30 AM
Hot, but scary.
Anonymous
5/27/16, 4:19 AM
J'espère que nous aurons à lire dans votre histoire que vous avez baisé beaucoup de gars français chaud.
Anonymous
5/27/16, 12:42 AM
The proposed scene in the barber shop sounds AWESOME! would be fantastic if Phil is mistaken with other Latino! Those who have pointed to the deportation issue have a point, would be good to mention it slightly at some point. Also, I would like to propose something: what do you say if Phil suddenly finds that all of his expensive clothing is now of cheap fake brands? There's some funny examples of that, like "Hike" instead of Nike, "Adadis" instead of Adidas, and "Albertcombie and Finch" instead of Abercrombie & Fitch. His former friends could tease him for wear fake brands, or maybe they would offer him a par of sneakers or a shirt, in exchange of some sexual services.
Anonymous
5/26/16, 10:36 PM
(I'm the one who suggested the haircut) I was thinking more along the lines of greased back on top and almost shaved on sides and back :) I'm not so sure I agree with it getting that deep though about being deported in a short story though, he has to start embracing it at some point haha.
Anonymous
5/26/16, 8:37 PM
Wowowowow