Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/27/16, 9:10 PM
Glad to see you back writing. This was a really nice way to return!
Anonymous
5/27/16, 8:04 PM
omg hakim. please write more .i didnt expect this is the end .
rofous
5/27/16, 4:48 PM
omg i waiting this for so long
Anonymous
5/27/16, 4:15 PM
Incredibly hot! Would love to see the Doc using the three guys to recruit for him.
Anonymous
5/27/16, 12:38 PM
I suspect that the author's use of stereotypical characteristics and the term "wetback" are intended to convey the victim's - the object of the TF - racist views. That is, the victim is being transformed into his own racist view of what a "wetback" Latino is.
Anonymous
5/27/16, 10:07 AM
Great to see you writing again. Keep em coming
Anonymous
5/27/16, 7:18 AM
Nice! A sequel please.
Anonymous
5/27/16, 6:44 AM
Hope you take this in the way it's intended -- i.e., as a friendly observation: It seems like you might not have any Latino friends, as the description of the Latino "wetback" and other stereotypical characteristics you use might imply a racist slant. Without saying that that is necessarily so, I would suggest being more careful in that regard.
Anonymous
5/27/16, 4:34 AM
Great start! This is headed for some weird shit, I can tell.
Anonymous
5/27/16, 4:30 AM
Hot, but scary.