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May 24, 2016
5/26/16, 1:48 PM
Thanks for the comments and praise everyone! This was actually intended to be a very short piece, just a caption on a photo that I found hot. I guess I focused too much on the image, so I ended up writing more about the sex than about the hypnosis. Will keep that in mind for future stories.
Orc_br
5/26/16, 12:50 PM
I miss some cultural/social aspects of the transformation. A illegal alien stereotype is someone who just got into a country, is very painful to be stripped of your culture. Everything is unfamiliar, you can't understand anyone, you must obey or be sent back. There so much this could be besides just being dumber.
May 24, 2016
Kyle
5/26/16, 7:59 AM
Excellent. Congratulations on a great first submission. I loved your approach. Look forward to more work from you.
Anonymous
5/26/16, 2:32 AM
Awesome start! I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Anonymous
5/26/16, 12:30 AM
Very hot! THank you!
Anonymous
5/25/16, 9:05 PM
Another great chapter :) Would love to see him struggle with the changes mentally! But I trust you'll do it justice haha. Thanks for your hard work!
Yes Please
5/25/16, 8:21 PM
I downloaded all of the files to my phone. I want Dumb Derick to come take me to the gym, grow me and fuck me.
bbfmtok@yahoo.com
5/25/16, 7:01 PM
it would be sexy to have the physical changes make him more muscular more mascline looking to be a better slave maybe really hairy too.
Anonymous
5/25/16, 6:38 PM
Nice. I like the way this seems to be headed. Since you made it possible that the Son can love the Dad's new lover as much as he does. That kind of which makes a lot of incest and options available in the future chapters. Please write the next one quickly. :)
Anonymous
5/25/16, 6:30 PM
Very nice!