Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/20/16, 6:40 PM
I love gay - to - straight stuff and it rarely gets done. Would love to have him suddenly turned on by gal pal Jill. And of course real dumb straight fratty bros are always jerking off together and showering at the gym, there's plenty of semi gay fun to be had
Ink_Nerd
5/20/16, 4:45 PM
as timnj said fat lazy with a beer belly and stained cloths for sure obsessed with sports let his hair grow out a bit so its more of a surfer style but since he rarely showers and is greasy keep under a backwards baseball cap. and he will for sure have to change his major or even better just outright drop out of collage. it would be hot to see his dumbing down though his struggle to do his homework. it would also be hot maybe if jill was affected by the change and becomes his girlfriend or at lest he could impregnate her and be the dead-beat dad type
TimNJ
5/20/16, 11:35 AM
I already love the setup and the characters! Ty should definitely become fat and lazy with a beer belly and stained clothes. I'd dump the Jill character though.
KeepGoingAlex
5/20/16, 9:12 AM
I Love Edlam, But...
Anonymous
5/20/16, 7:07 AM
Thrilled to find out how Brandon changes Ty. It would be great if Coach of the sport team, especially football, is behind and forcesTy transform with Brandon and join the team. It helps a room to create sequels. Ty can play a role of Brandon to transform his friends.
xORRiNx
5/20/16, 4:54 AM
^ ^ ^ Thank you! :) I'm very much enjoying writing this one the most!!
Anonymous
5/20/16, 4:50 AM
Oh goodness this sounds perfect. I don't have much 'feedback' to give, I love all the elements you have set up - geek to bro, gay to straight, messiness. The slow shift in personality and interests, the steadily lower intelligence, being uneasy about the change but going with it anyways. I've enjoyed all of your stories, but this one is already looking like it'll be my favorite. So, thanks for your work.
Anonymous
5/20/16, 3:28 AM
I'm still hoping that Ty will still do gay things once the changes are done whether he likes it or not :3c
Blufur1@comcast.net
5/20/16, 2:48 AM
A pleasure to read
xORRiNx
5/20/16, 1:55 AM
I hadn't planned on continuing with this story but I suppose if the demand is high I may. The group of friends coming over could either gang up on Tom or Jack could drain them of their masculinity also. I have some work to do on my Labels series then I may revisit here.