Recent Comments

TimNJ
5/20/16, 11:35 AM
I already love the setup and the characters! Ty should definitely become fat and lazy with a beer belly and stained clothes. I'd dump the Jill character though.
KeepGoingAlex
5/20/16, 9:12 AM
I Love Edlam, But...
Anonymous
5/20/16, 7:07 AM
Thrilled to find out how Brandon changes Ty. It would be great if Coach of the sport team, especially football, is behind and forcesTy transform with Brandon and join the team. It helps a room to create sequels. Ty can play a role of Brandon to transform his friends.
xORRiNx
5/20/16, 4:54 AM
^ ^ ^ Thank you! :) I'm very much enjoying writing this one the most!!
Anonymous
5/20/16, 4:50 AM
Oh goodness this sounds perfect. I don't have much 'feedback' to give, I love all the elements you have set up - geek to bro, gay to straight, messiness. The slow shift in personality and interests, the steadily lower intelligence, being uneasy about the change but going with it anyways. I've enjoyed all of your stories, but this one is already looking like it'll be my favorite. So, thanks for your work.
Anonymous
5/20/16, 3:28 AM
I'm still hoping that Ty will still do gay things once the changes are done whether he likes it or not :3c
Blufur1@comcast.net
5/20/16, 2:48 AM
A pleasure to read
xORRiNx
5/20/16, 1:55 AM
I hadn't planned on continuing with this story but I suppose if the demand is high I may. The group of friends coming over could either gang up on Tom or Jack could drain them of their masculinity also. I have some work to do on my Labels series then I may revisit here.
xORRiNx
5/20/16, 1:53 AM
I don't want to change Brandon at all! I think I have a solid direction on where I'm going with Ty. There will be so much mental and physical change! And so much resistance :P
Anonymous
5/20/16, 1:27 AM
Great story!!!