Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/18/16, 5:19 AM
Just perfect. Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks alot!
Anonymous
5/18/16, 4:57 AM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
5/18/16, 4:55 AM
The story was hot. But it was so poorly written that it took time to get through the thicket. Writing ends with editing. Having said that -- next chapter, please.
Willie Cici
5/18/16, 4:53 AM
See -- that's what I mean about comments and their helpfulness. I had not even thought of a sequel until I read TimNJ's comment. I'll have to get working on that next installment soon.
Anonymous
5/18/16, 1:15 AM
It did seem rushed but it made me cum so i loved it anyway LOL ;D
Anonymous
5/18/16, 12:00 AM
Great story. I hope you continue it.
5/17/16, 2:14 PM
The story is hot enough, but this would probably have benefited a lot from a rewrite or two. Also, there is no sense of scale or continuity: "Oh, incidentally, it's also a time machine." And this guy works in accounting? That said, I want to see your next story.
Anonymous
5/17/16, 12:10 PM
U gonna beef up his bro's..? 'Coz i kinda like the idea of ONE twink getting ganbanged by more beefy bro's..?
JasCo
5/17/16, 12:07 PM
Cool story. If one of his buddies gets a bit too alpha he could transform him as well and have a second bitch!
Anonymous
5/17/16, 10:26 AM
Very hot. I'm curious to find out what can be fit into his stretched out hole.