Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/18/16, 11:40 AM
It would be awesome if someone who can read/write both German and English could translate this. Using Google Translate, I myself can probably re-write it for English-only speakers. The only problems are: 1. It will take me a long time due to the sheer amount of content in these 4 parts, and 2. Google Translate generally only does things literally, which I would then have to interpret as what the author "likely" meant. I' sure some of the story and nuance will be lost if I do so. If the author is able to speak & write English, even if broken, and is willing to help correct some of the glaring gaffs I'm liable to make, I'd be more than happy to give it a shot.
Xmale06
5/18/16, 8:11 AM
Don't tell me it's a one-shot story!!!! You HAVE TO keep it going!!!!
Anonymous
5/18/16, 5:19 AM
Just perfect. Cant wait for the next chapter! Thanks alot!
Anonymous
5/18/16, 4:57 AM
Great story!!! Loved it!!!
Anonymous
5/18/16, 4:55 AM
The story was hot. But it was so poorly written that it took time to get through the thicket. Writing ends with editing. Having said that -- next chapter, please.
Willie Cici
5/18/16, 4:53 AM
See -- that's what I mean about comments and their helpfulness. I had not even thought of a sequel until I read TimNJ's comment. I'll have to get working on that next installment soon.
Anonymous
5/18/16, 1:15 AM
It did seem rushed but it made me cum so i loved it anyway LOL ;D
Anonymous
5/18/16, 12:00 AM
Great story. I hope you continue it.
5/17/16, 2:14 PM
The story is hot enough, but this would probably have benefited a lot from a rewrite or two. Also, there is no sense of scale or continuity: "Oh, incidentally, it's also a time machine." And this guy works in accounting? That said, I want to see your next story.
Anonymous
5/17/16, 12:10 PM
U gonna beef up his bro's..? 'Coz i kinda like the idea of ONE twink getting ganbanged by more beefy bro's..?