Recent Comments

Jim
5/16/16, 6:56 PM
Please, make the new Phil very tacky and vulgar, with some strong ghetto qualities. You could add a lot of that describing details like the clothes he wear, or the music he likes. Furn him into a fucking naco! I suggest some loud music, like "banda" or "corridos", that always have noisy trumpets, trombones and accordions. Also, many of those songs are about getting drunk and how manly the singers supposedly are (but then, there's singers like Gerardo Ortiz that likes to wear skinny golden pants, flamboyant flowered shirts, and plucked eyebrows, so there's some sexual ambiguity and a lot of vulgarity). You can keep your interest making him feel innerly humiliated with his changes, and aware of how ugly he's becoming, but unable to make something to stop the changes. By the way, do you need some help with the words in Spanish? I could help you with that
Anonymous
5/16/16, 6:17 PM
Good story! Hope to see more about
dougkent60
5/16/16, 6:05 PM
sod the grammar, it was hot
Sieg
5/16/16, 2:44 PM
You assume ;p
Anonymous
5/16/16, 2:44 PM
Interesting premise!! Putting aside the grammar and usage, the story had some kick.
Anonymous
5/16/16, 1:05 PM
Good stuff but I can't get over that we go to the same university
Anonymous
5/16/16, 11:55 AM
Wow = if only muscle growth was THIS easy! Try growing his legs and chest next! Totally orgasmic!
Anonymous
5/16/16, 9:05 AM
I love your story, too. Can you share your plans for the next chapter with me as well?
Kyle
5/16/16, 5:36 AM
Really enjoying this series. Well done! Touching and hot all at the same time.
S.A
5/16/16, 4:53 AM
Hot. Really trully hot. I wonder what will be next, Derek did say he was only going to go as far as file 6. It would have been really hot if he sort of already got too addicted to dumbing down to stop at file 6. But obviously this is real world, and Derek dose have a job and stuff, so its rather unlikely. I'm really surprised at how this turned me on, considering I avoid dumbing down hypno like the plague.