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8/17/24, 7:07 PM
Excellent work

8/17/24, 8:39 PM
@[Dan25](/user/show/10053172) Thank you Dan !
Markus Shmarkus Platypus
8/17/24, 8:17 PM
Wonderful story, but if i may ask, was this in any way inspired by The Labyrinth? The movie, I mean
8/17/24, 8:13 PM
OMG. OMG. Panting. Slow burn. Have me wanting for the next chapter. Can't stop!!!
8/17/24, 6:43 PM
As always, I've been having a great time! GH: 1097448 GPSH: 7091
Anonymous
8/17/24, 4:38 PM
Just found this amazing story. It's such a shame that the author stopped writing, can't see anything online of him. If you ever see this, Lunkdunk, you're an amazing writer, thank you so much for this incredible story!
8/17/24, 4:25 PM
Another fantastic story from Kyle! I love the concept and the writing is so colorful and descriptive, it feels incredibly real! Thank you for sharing your awesome work!
8/17/24, 4:23 PM
WOW!!! The original was hot but you have taken it to new EXCITING levels. I am ready to dive into the second chapter. AMAZING!!!
8/17/24, 3:10 PM
GPSH ID - 4585; Really liking the 'Oy, Mista! You Me Dad?' event; this version works better than other formats (e.g. the one without rankings, which made it too hard to get enough resources to get the guys).
8/16/24, 7:07 PM
I really like this story! Excited to see what will happen next.

8/17/24, 11:02 AM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thanks for reading!!