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Fetboy
5/15/16, 11:58 PM
Wow, awesome story! Please continue, this is insanely hot!
May 10, 2016
5/15/16, 9:58 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys! I could certainly imagine more stories in this universe. We'll see . . . ;-)
Jake260
5/15/16, 8:28 PM
Great chapter, I love your writing I can't wait for another chapter
jsh71603@gmail.com
5/15/16, 7:30 PM
Emails were 2015, so the tumblr might be gone, but I can't get enough of reading this story either. It brought back some memories of me being with that hazy fuzzy feeling in my head so I can relate to that.
Anonymous
5/15/16, 6:18 PM
Good, good! Man, I love this story. And about the link to tumblr, I think Derek is so dumb now, that he was unable to attach the link! LOL
Anonymous
5/15/16, 6:02 PM
I was waiting for the next chapter for so long, and It is as good as I hoped it would be! I'm anxious to read about the changes in his behavior and clothing style! I'm wondering, the change will affect his family too, or the perception of Phil's family about him? I mean, all of them will become into wetbacks, or they will think on Phil as a domestic employee?
Willie Cici
5/15/16, 5:38 PM
1. I enjoy reading the comments. It keeps me grounded. There are some stories that I've posted that I was sure would be a hit. The comments I receive provided insight to where I took a wrong turn. Some comments inspired a sequel chapter, where I had not envisioned a second or third chapter. 2. I write these stories because it's fun and fantasy. It's the sexual equivalent of daydreaming about winning the lottery. If I entertain anyone along the way, that's good. Any other reaction is not intended. 3. I prefer to write shorter stories because I prefer to read shorter stories. Long winded diatribes that plod along bore the shit out of me. 4. As long as I enjoy what I'm doing, I'll keep writing and posting. Please write your comments. I want to know, as does every other author on this site, when we produce well and when we produce crap.
dougkent60
5/15/16, 5:02 PM
The video on Tumblr you mentioned doesn't show am I doing something wrong?
dougkent60
5/15/16, 4:48 PM
This gets hotter and hotter. I have chatted with Derek and he seems a good guy. Wow, the predictive text is working, it was bad on Tumblr when on to Derek
Steve
5/15/16, 4:33 PM
Ooh! A call for suggestions! Howzabout Dirk puts Tristan in charge of his roommate sexually. Leaves Tristan straight in mind but Tristan has to dominate the roommate sexually and the roommate has no choice but to submit...