Recent Comments

dougkent60
5/15/16, 7:58 AM
Awesome is what was going to say too
Anonymous
5/15/16, 7:22 AM
I haven't seen anybody getting pilloried. It's valid criticism to point out that an author might be falling into a rut. It's also entirely understandable for someone to tell what they find hot in a TF story and, by implication, what they'd like to see more of in a writer's work.
Anonymous
5/15/16, 6:04 AM
Wow! A guy takes the time and effort to write a story and then gets pilloried for it! Chill out guys! Some of his stories I like more than others, but I am always grateful to him and the other writers for their efforts.
Anonymous
5/14/16, 11:08 PM
Awesome!
Anonymous
5/14/16, 9:29 PM
needing more excellent and what also for mom
Anonymous
5/14/16, 2:38 PM
Don't see what the fuss all about . Another straight guy turned around Hope Willie don't take comments to seriously Maybe he could explain in follow up chapter as daddy finds out his boy went down and joined hunt Only Willie could stroke our interests there
D
5/14/16, 2:20 PM
i like this bro. cant wait til S gets home...
Anonymous
5/14/16, 11:20 AM
Just perfect! Totally cant wait for the next chapter!
A CONCERNED READER
5/14/16, 6:30 AM
WILL EDLAM EVER ACTUALLY WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER OF THIS STORY ? THIS WAS LAST YEAR'S MOST OUTSTANDING STORY & WHEN THE AUTHOR ASKED FOR OUR UNDERSTANDING IN WAITING FOR CHAPTER EIGHT, WE WERE ALL MORE THAN HAPPY TO GIVE HIM THE TIME HE NEEDED AFTER HE GAVE US , HIS READERS, SO MUCH PLEASURE.....BUT REALLY, IT'S TIME TO CONTINUE THIS OR WIND IT UP...ISN'T IT ??? WE LOVE YOU EDLAM..PLEASE SHOW US YOU STILL LOVE YOUR 'FAITHFUL' READERS & FINISH THIS UP !!!...THANKS....
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/14/16, 5:32 AM
Being tranced to be dumb IS hot! Wish i could do it knowing whar was happening and knowing i was doing it to myself -- and making another guy jack iff watching it happen to me!