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A CONCERNED READER
5/14/16, 6:30 AM
WILL EDLAM EVER ACTUALLY WRITE ANOTHER CHAPTER OF THIS STORY ? THIS WAS LAST YEAR'S MOST OUTSTANDING STORY & WHEN THE AUTHOR ASKED FOR OUR UNDERSTANDING IN WAITING FOR CHAPTER EIGHT, WE WERE ALL MORE THAN HAPPY TO GIVE HIM THE TIME HE NEEDED AFTER HE GAVE US , HIS READERS, SO MUCH PLEASURE.....BUT REALLY, IT'S TIME TO CONTINUE THIS OR WIND IT UP...ISN'T IT ??? WE LOVE YOU EDLAM..PLEASE SHOW US YOU STILL LOVE YOUR 'FAITHFUL' READERS & FINISH THIS UP !!!...THANKS....
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/14/16, 5:32 AM
Being tranced to be dumb IS hot! Wish i could do it knowing whar was happening and knowing i was doing it to myself -- and making another guy jack iff watching it happen to me!
Anonymous
5/14/16, 1:56 AM
Do black diks !matter next. Lov dat
Bbcbitch
5/14/16, 1:53 AM
Oh yea Black dicks matter!!!
Anonymous
5/14/16, 12:11 AM
Cici's work is quick read material, not everyone is looking for chapters or continuations of stories. Look at all the unfinished stories on this site and we complain about that. The work of this author is good for what it is. Think of him as the greeting card author of this site, and that's ok, and actually I prefer it. It seems sometimes Cici is the only author who contributes, so why not complain about fresh material?
Anonymous
5/13/16, 7:56 PM
This is so sexy.
Anonymous
5/13/16, 6:17 PM
The "literature" posted on this site is not Pulitzer prize winning stuff. The site collects "creative rants". Has anyone read "Frankenstein"? Does Shelley spend chapters on the actual process of making his creation? No -- body parts and then, you jump to living re-incarnation. The character's desires, motives and sexual warp-ness are in the prose. Read it again. It's there. Having said all that -- this was a freaky story. I could hear banjos playing the background.
Johan
5/13/16, 5:50 PM
Congrats! Estimated time/day? :D
Anonymous
5/13/16, 12:00 PM
Woah - interesting premise. This would have been more suspenseful with more of a build up to "the hunt" - more foreshadowing, more questions about it, more implications that it was part of the "family tradition". Still, an interesting premise.
Sieg
5/13/16, 11:36 AM
Oh! I understand what you're talking about now! In this instance it should be answered around the same time as the other questions ;)