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S.A
5/16/16, 4:53 AM
Hot. Really trully hot. I wonder what will be next, Derek did say he was only going to go as far as file 6. It would have been really hot if he sort of already got too addicted to dumbing down to stop at file 6. But obviously this is real world, and Derek dose have a job and stuff, so its rather unlikely. I'm really surprised at how this turned me on, considering I avoid dumbing down hypno like the plague.
5/16/16, 4:42 AM
It'll happen...no time frame because I feel like I may not be able to fulfill it. Believe me, guys, this has been the busiest few months of my life and it's not letting up. This week was filled with visiting family and friends, job interviews, and DESPERATELY needed relaxation. I'll continue...I've even shared my plans for the next chapter with one of my friends who loves my story. I can't let him down and I won't let you all down. I'll get it done. Just let me do it within the time needed.
5/16/16, 4:33 AM
Willie, you've clearly got a good head and your shoulders and the right attitude. Keep writing your stories. If YOU enjoy it, it doesn't matter in the slightest what anyone else thinks.
TimNJ
5/16/16, 4:19 AM
I like it and I wish the chapters were longer! Now mlease tell me he dumps Chloe but hooks up with her brother!
Anonymous
5/16/16, 1:53 AM
Interesting!!!
Anonymous
5/16/16, 1:49 AM
Greeting card? What section of Hallmark are you in?
Fetboy
5/15/16, 11:58 PM
Wow, awesome story! Please continue, this is insanely hot!
May 10, 2016
5/15/16, 9:58 PM
Thanks for the feedback guys! I could certainly imagine more stories in this universe. We'll see . . . ;-)
Jake260
5/15/16, 8:28 PM
Great chapter, I love your writing I can't wait for another chapter
jsh71603@gmail.com
5/15/16, 7:30 PM
Emails were 2015, so the tumblr might be gone, but I can't get enough of reading this story either. It brought back some memories of me being with that hazy fuzzy feeling in my head so I can relate to that.