Recent Comments

5/13/16, 7:12 AM
Sieg, you conveyed the changes very well. It's not weird that Brad made the mistake, but (if his memory remains unchanged) he might, in retrospect, find it very strange that Sam is now quite different from the way he was at the party. Then again, he was drunk and many people have trouble remembering people they've met only once before. It's not an important matter - it's just that your story is solid enough to make me interested in details, background and consequences.
xORRiNx
5/13/16, 6:41 AM
One more thing... I THINK another reason for the speed up is that one of my biggiest kinks/turn-ons is the subtle changes up front and the mental fighting. The resistance of the TF is key for me... once the resistance is decreased and the TF complete I want to end the story there. AKA the story is the BECOMING of something and not BEING something. It could just be because I'm half asleep right now but it makes sense to me.
Anonymous
5/13/16, 6:29 AM
I have to agree: it's a great premise (as usual), and really started to pick up around the hunt. But then it felt rushed to a conclusion before we could savor his defeat.
Anonymous
5/13/16, 4:48 AM
Interesting. Not your best, but interesting!!
xORRiNx
5/13/16, 4:42 AM
I hear ya, guys. In my defense I was no longer connected to this story (vs when I was really into it in March). ...Combined with my eagerness to continue other stories. I hope to WOW everyone with my new stories.
Whatabear
5/13/16, 4:14 AM
OMG the tattoos are now real, his tongue is pierced and he is talking so effeminent! Quite a change!
Anonymous
5/13/16, 3:57 AM
REMEMBER THE AUTHOR MAKES IT CLEAR SEVERAL TIMES THAT THE 'SON' IS EIGHTEEN, SO THERE'S NOTHING WRONG WITH THIS STORY : ONLY NORMAL EROTIC 'PERVERSION' : COME OFF IT !!!
Anonymous
5/13/16, 3:20 AM
I thought this sort of perversion was not permitted on this site.
Anonymous
5/13/16, 2:28 AM
Have to agree with the above comment. No disrespect, Orrin, I know you work hard but the attention to detail and slow, deliberate pacing that made the first chapters so enthralling were just absent from this one, and I can't help but be disappointed because I was looking forward so much to seeing the end results of the transformation and we barely got a glimpse. Even the actual "topping and bottoming" happened "off camera." I too wish you could add to it. Regardless, I love your writing.
A San Francisco Reader
5/13/16, 1:29 AM
After such a long wait, I must admit, I was a little disapointed at how brief this was, especially in terms of Robbie. As some of the other "what the hell, so many fellows were following the story, I guess I'll knock something out & finish this thing".nd changes... is it possible that the Author might go back & add more to THIS STORY, before he writes any new one's ???? It was as if he was bored by the whole thing & figured