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Johan
5/13/16, 5:50 PM
Congrats! Estimated time/day? :D
Anonymous
5/13/16, 12:00 PM
Woah - interesting premise. This would have been more suspenseful with more of a build up to "the hunt" - more foreshadowing, more questions about it, more implications that it was part of the "family tradition". Still, an interesting premise.
Sieg
5/13/16, 11:36 AM
Oh! I understand what you're talking about now! In this instance it should be answered around the same time as the other questions ;)
5/13/16, 11:14 AM
This makes my skin crawl. There's a terrible kind of thrill in losing yourself, letting your mind be shaped by someone else. Yet no matter just how much you enjoy it, you're losing yourself. You're losing skills that you had, losing core aspects of your personality, losing what makes you who you are. It's awful. Awful, and yet awfully, awfully hot. I'm glad you're happy, D. I hope that, in your place, I would be too. But I wouldn't put myself in your position even if my life depended on it.
Xmale06
5/13/16, 9:35 AM
Good (as always), and pretty interesting storylines too; apart maybe for the one going straight? Anyway, glad to see you back!
Anonymous
5/13/16, 8:50 AM
Meh. Same problem I have with all of this author's work, more or less. There's never any attention paid to the point-of-view character's mental state. Instead of a glimpse inside their head as they find their nature, desires, and sexuality warped and twisted to suit someone else's desires, there's...just a token nod and either an instant complete personality rewrite, or worse, a timeskip. Mr. Cici simply never considers it a priority to show anything BETWEEN the initial state and the end result, it seems, and that's where all the hotness is...
Anonymous
5/13/16, 8:43 AM
a story about a gypsy men dancer... please.
dougkent60
5/13/16, 8:05 AM
All your work is exciting to me. This was different but totally enjoyable
Anonymous
5/13/16, 7:49 AM
much fantasy, fantasy
5/13/16, 7:12 AM
Sieg, you conveyed the changes very well. It's not weird that Brad made the mistake, but (if his memory remains unchanged) he might, in retrospect, find it very strange that Sam is now quite different from the way he was at the party. Then again, he was drunk and many people have trouble remembering people they've met only once before. It's not an important matter - it's just that your story is solid enough to make me interested in details, background and consequences.