Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/13/16, 8:43 AM
a story about a gypsy men dancer... please.
dougkent60
5/13/16, 8:05 AM
All your work is exciting to me. This was different but totally enjoyable
Anonymous
5/13/16, 7:49 AM
much fantasy, fantasy
5/13/16, 7:12 AM
Sieg, you conveyed the changes very well. It's not weird that Brad made the mistake, but (if his memory remains unchanged) he might, in retrospect, find it very strange that Sam is now quite different from the way he was at the party. Then again, he was drunk and many people have trouble remembering people they've met only once before. It's not an important matter - it's just that your story is solid enough to make me interested in details, background and consequences.
xORRiNx
5/13/16, 6:41 AM
One more thing... I THINK another reason for the speed up is that one of my biggiest kinks/turn-ons is the subtle changes up front and the mental fighting. The resistance of the TF is key for me... once the resistance is decreased and the TF complete I want to end the story there. AKA the story is the BECOMING of something and not BEING something. It could just be because I'm half asleep right now but it makes sense to me.
Anonymous
5/13/16, 6:29 AM
I have to agree: it's a great premise (as usual), and really started to pick up around the hunt. But then it felt rushed to a conclusion before we could savor his defeat.
Anonymous
5/13/16, 4:48 AM
Interesting. Not your best, but interesting!!
xORRiNx
5/13/16, 4:42 AM
I hear ya, guys. In my defense I was no longer connected to this story (vs when I was really into it in March). ...Combined with my eagerness to continue other stories. I hope to WOW everyone with my new stories.
Whatabear
5/13/16, 4:14 AM
OMG the tattoos are now real, his tongue is pierced and he is talking so effeminent! Quite a change!
Anonymous
5/13/16, 3:57 AM
REMEMBER THE AUTHOR MAKES IT CLEAR SEVERAL TIMES THAT THE 'SON' IS EIGHTEEN, SO THERE'S NOTHING WRONG WITH THIS STORY : ONLY NORMAL EROTIC 'PERVERSION' : COME OFF IT !!!