Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/12/16, 7:18 PM
This is getting better and better! I've laughed a lot with the mentions of Transformers, Avengers, Battleship and Agents of Shield. Derek should watch Batman v Superman, I'm sure he'll gonna enjoy it in his current state. He could also go to watch Captain America 3, would be fun if he gets a boner or a dirty fantasy while watching Chris Evans in his tight uniform.
Anonymous
5/12/16, 6:45 PM
Be neat to read you working other sorts of accent changes and shifts in vernacular in upcoming stories.
Anonymous
5/12/16, 6:19 PM
Felt somewhat rushed, but thank you for taking the time to finish the series. Looking forward to more from you in the future!
Sieg
5/12/16, 5:09 PM
Assuming initial was the lunch delivery, It COULD have something to do with not paying attention. If you do something enough times you can normally do it on auto without paying attention to details. Not to mention the constant zoned out nature of someone constantly getting high. By now, the sum of changes should make it hard for someone to tell the difference between the two. I'm sure I could have conveyed that better by the end of this part. (Keep in mind it's my first attempt at writing so critiquing will help improve the writing!) Remainder of the questions will most likely be answered in part 5! :)
dougkent6p
5/12/16, 4:32 PM
Hotter every episode
Anonymous
5/12/16, 3:34 PM
I don't care what anyone says, I love lisping Robbie and I wish we'd heard more from him in this chapter (but I guess he had his mouth full ;-)). Also love his submissiveness and obedience. This chapter was kind of less is more but I still loved it. Wish we could have seen a little more of the boys life at college and in the dorm post-curse but I understand you wanted to finish up. Love your work!
5/12/16, 3:23 PM
I actually meant Brad. Sam's reactions are the core of the story, but he is undergoing a transformation and his opinions and memories might not be very reliable. Brad, however, is currently witnessing what seems to be a reality shift from the outside. Of course it might be he'll end up remembering Sam has always been what he will be, but if not, what happens? If his memories are not changing along with Sam, the utterly weird initial mistaken identity (the body types were totally different) deserves a comment, which can be anything from "I must have been even more drunk than I thought" to "Oh boy, Scooter is at it again." I'm eager to see where this is going.
Anonymous
5/12/16, 2:51 PM
Is he turning into scooter? Like his identical twin? Or maybe even Scooter himself
VRL
5/12/16, 2:49 PM
You know these stories have awakened a fetish in me that i never knew i had before Turning a smart nerd into a dumb himbo
Anonymous
5/12/16, 1:32 PM
Please continue. This is great.