Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/13/16, 6:29 AM
I have to agree: it's a great premise (as usual), and really started to pick up around the hunt. But then it felt rushed to a conclusion before we could savor his defeat.
Anonymous
5/13/16, 4:48 AM
Interesting. Not your best, but interesting!!
xORRiNx
5/13/16, 4:42 AM
I hear ya, guys. In my defense I was no longer connected to this story (vs when I was really into it in March). ...Combined with my eagerness to continue other stories. I hope to WOW everyone with my new stories.
Whatabear
5/13/16, 4:14 AM
OMG the tattoos are now real, his tongue is pierced and he is talking so effeminent! Quite a change!
Anonymous
5/13/16, 3:57 AM
REMEMBER THE AUTHOR MAKES IT CLEAR SEVERAL TIMES THAT THE 'SON' IS EIGHTEEN, SO THERE'S NOTHING WRONG WITH THIS STORY : ONLY NORMAL EROTIC 'PERVERSION' : COME OFF IT !!!
Anonymous
5/13/16, 3:20 AM
I thought this sort of perversion was not permitted on this site.
Anonymous
5/13/16, 2:28 AM
Have to agree with the above comment. No disrespect, Orrin, I know you work hard but the attention to detail and slow, deliberate pacing that made the first chapters so enthralling were just absent from this one, and I can't help but be disappointed because I was looking forward so much to seeing the end results of the transformation and we barely got a glimpse. Even the actual "topping and bottoming" happened "off camera." I too wish you could add to it. Regardless, I love your writing.
A San Francisco Reader
5/13/16, 1:29 AM
After such a long wait, I must admit, I was a little disapointed at how brief this was, especially in terms of Robbie. As some of the other "what the hell, so many fellows were following the story, I guess I'll knock something out & finish this thing".nd changes... is it possible that the Author might go back & add more to THIS STORY, before he writes any new one's ???? It was as if he was bored by the whole thing & figured
UchihaDEMS
5/12/16, 10:43 PM
Well, this was... something for sure.
Anonymous
5/12/16, 9:18 PM
I wish there was a new chapter of this every day! So good