Recent Comments

Anonymous
5/13/16, 3:20 AM
I thought this sort of perversion was not permitted on this site.
Anonymous
5/13/16, 2:28 AM
Have to agree with the above comment. No disrespect, Orrin, I know you work hard but the attention to detail and slow, deliberate pacing that made the first chapters so enthralling were just absent from this one, and I can't help but be disappointed because I was looking forward so much to seeing the end results of the transformation and we barely got a glimpse. Even the actual "topping and bottoming" happened "off camera." I too wish you could add to it. Regardless, I love your writing.
A San Francisco Reader
5/13/16, 1:29 AM
After such a long wait, I must admit, I was a little disapointed at how brief this was, especially in terms of Robbie. As some of the other "what the hell, so many fellows were following the story, I guess I'll knock something out & finish this thing".nd changes... is it possible that the Author might go back & add more to THIS STORY, before he writes any new one's ???? It was as if he was bored by the whole thing & figured
UchihaDEMS
5/12/16, 10:43 PM
Well, this was... something for sure.
Anonymous
5/12/16, 9:18 PM
I wish there was a new chapter of this every day! So good
Anonymous
5/12/16, 8:53 PM
Ooh,a hot interracial story?.. As long as the black guy gets even more muscular,as the white guy thins down.
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5/12/16, 8:01 PM
haha i did go see the new Cap movie...dudes bicep wuz great wen he held down rhe copter!
Anonymous
5/12/16, 7:33 PM
Definitely felt a little rushed, agree that it would have been nice to describe other ways their dynamic changes around campus and how their lives would have changed.
Anonymous
5/12/16, 7:18 PM
This is getting better and better! I've laughed a lot with the mentions of Transformers, Avengers, Battleship and Agents of Shield. Derek should watch Batman v Superman, I'm sure he'll gonna enjoy it in his current state. He could also go to watch Captain America 3, would be fun if he gets a boner or a dirty fantasy while watching Chris Evans in his tight uniform.
Anonymous
5/12/16, 6:45 PM
Be neat to read you working other sorts of accent changes and shifts in vernacular in upcoming stories.