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Anonymous
5/11/16, 2:58 PM
Whatever plot you chose Willie we know it will be good
Anonymous
5/11/16, 2:58 PM
Whatever plot you chose Willie we know it will be good
May 10, 2016
binj
5/11/16, 12:33 PM
Great story loved the ending Any chance a second or follow up story with the lovers and the virus possible
Anonymous
5/11/16, 8:42 AM
Happy birthday! And happy to see you, tomozco! Any chance to see both of you two's sequels?
S.A
5/11/16, 6:57 AM
@20:15(for lack of nickname) That dose sound like a hard life. But I still don't think "dumbing down" like Derek is the right choice. If I'm allowed to be a bit colorful: Let's imagine the mind as a lake, and the owner of the mind to be a fisherman. Your mind (as you decribe) seems to be full of lively fishes (thoughts) that jumps around and make big waves. They rock the ship and fill it with water and fishes. You do get the fish you want, but with a lot of needless 'waste'. My idea of the "good" form of mind will be a peaceful lake with clear water and quite fishes. Where you (the fisherman) can swiftly get the fishes you want with accuracy of a sharp knife. And Derek's dumb mind will be a lake full of muck and unclear water, where it's just too much effort the find your fish and you might as well just go and buy a fish someone else caught. @speaks-without-breathing Derek dose have a blog, he might have uploaded some pictures of himself. I think he posted a link at one of his recent storys. Sorry for the long comment.
Captain C
5/11/16, 5:33 AM
I didn't have the time or energy to fully explain my comment, so that's on me, I apologize. I have had a few bad experiences with people I've met using files that have ended badly. While I practice hypnosis and enjoy it immensely, I have to deal with the fear of going too far sometimes, the fear of what I do having a profound effect. It's irrational, and hard to understand for ME, let alone others. But like I said, I have had bad experiences, and reading about someone doing this to themselves chills me. I only wanted to chime in after Viridian because I felt like that side of the reality of this fetish doesn't come up a lot in conversations on here, especially since stories like this that are (more) real are very few. To add to my complicated relationship with my hypnosis fetish, I also have a hard time with my own thoughts and also need time where those go away. I recognize that being made dumber like this is a way to combat that. I don't generally get a lot of that time, but when I do I don't think of it as dumbing down as much as just letting all thoughts just sort of fade. But that's another way to put it, I can see that now. I respect others enjoyment of this. I respect every persons choice to have things they like that I may or may not. I apologize for my earlier comment.
5/11/16, 5:31 AM
I love this whole saga. You're one of my favorite writers on here, Cris! I love how when you look beyond the various transformations (which are hot, by the way), at the heart it's a really touching love story! How it ends gives me the feels :)
tomozco
5/11/16, 4:39 AM
Congrats on your degree and happy BDay, Edlam!!! Looking forward to your next installment...I'm hoping to read more about Officer Cockforbrains and more family fun now with Dad together. Keep it up! ;)
5/11/16, 4:09 AM
Quick update!! I graduated last week, had my birthday yesterday, and have finally begun the relaxation period!! I started editing through Chapter 8 today and have been working on it all day!! I hope to get it done really soon. Thank you ALL for being so patient and waiting. I know it had to have been fucking exhausting waiting on me, but I appreciate the patience as I finished up my nursing degree. Half Life 3 is coming ;)
May 10, 2016
HyperMuscleMonster
5/11/16, 3:47 AM
That virus needs to escape, and make it to the mainland.