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May 10, 2016
Cris Kane
5/10/16, 3:05 PM
A nice fresh twist, well written...and, oh yeah, hot.
Anonymous
5/10/16, 12:00 PM
Kind of scary to watch the narrator become dumber and dumber. I wonder when he'll reach "the point of no return"? He won't even know that, poor SOB! His "friend" is a d*ck for letting him do this to himself.
May 10, 2016
dougkent60@gmail.com
5/10/16, 11:47 AM
I loved every second of that
dougkent60@gmail.com
5/10/16, 11:25 AM
I'm loving it and it's a great advert for these files. I'm getting to want to join Derek but will wait till the finish in case I lose the ability to read these posts.
May 10, 2016
TimNJ
5/10/16, 10:48 AM
I loved it! Hot!
ViVe
5/10/16, 7:11 AM
Fascinating read! :) Makes me wonder... can you dumb someone down to a ballmer peak?
5/10/16, 6:22 AM
One of my favorite stories on here. I love the progression through different forms, and the way his mind changes with each physical change.
Anonymous
5/10/16, 5:14 AM
Wow,thats all i can say
RicanCub
5/10/16, 4:48 AM
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Would love to see a sequel or another installment but this was just great. Came.