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Anonymous
5/8/16, 6:30 PM
Hey , this was great but I was really hoping for more of your other story as well :)
Anonymous
5/8/16, 5:39 PM
Very good start, can't wait to see more! :)
Anonymous
5/8/16, 3:17 PM
Half life 3 confirmed
Anonymous
5/8/16, 2:33 PM
When he posts the chapter itll be as if half life 3 came out
Anonymous
5/8/16, 2:31 PM
The people ,and me,want the new Chapter bad
Anonymous
5/8/16, 2:30 PM
I love your work dude,but look at these comments,theyre longer than the actual story
Anonymous
5/8/16, 2:25 PM
I agree the writer of such fictions falls prey to one of his own fantasies
Jun 12, 2011
sweatnosis
5/8/16, 1:29 PM
Interesting. There's no overt mind control anywhere in the story - but after Marc used the term kindred spirits for both relationships, I suspected Harold behind the scenes of course. Maybe he even made Marc gay, then slowly "recreated" him in Frank. I wouldn't have minded a glimpse of his manipulations, or if you prefer it this subtle, maybe have Frank spontaneously develop a passionate interest in a rarer kink than leather and rubber - or maybe something Marc had that Harold didn't share, but that Harold might have instilled it just to get his twins matching as much as possible. Just thoughts, I did like the very subtle story.
sweatnosis
5/8/16, 12:34 PM
I'm not a fan of drone stories, or the fusion at the end (couldn't help visualizing it as the leather basically turning into latex) but as a kid who was literally entranced by leather jackets to the point of taking insane risks to feel, smell or wear people's, this story is automatically a favorite. You really evoked that obsessive compulsive part of my adolescence (never fully lost it). I would have LOVED to learn more about what he thought of leather biker jackets before, what guys wearing them meant to him, and what images of his transformations in the jacket start to seduce him and excite him. :)