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Aug 15, 2024
8/15/24, 7:34 PM
This was good. Very hot. :fire: :fire: :fire:

8/17/24, 12:19 AM
@[Pwrliftermscl](/user/show/941605) I'm always glad to be told that I brought the heat.
Aug 15, 2024
8/15/24, 6:36 PM
Moreee

8/17/24, 12:19 AM
@[Erratic101](/user/show/921294) There won't be any more of this one, but I have another following close behind it.
Aug 15, 2024
slavethruhytpno@yahoo.com
8/15/24, 9:08 PM
Damn this is one hot story! Two roommates being reprogrammed to be becoming slaves to a Dominant Man. Oh to be one of those roommates!

8/17/24, 12:18 AM
@slavethruhytpno@yahoo.com Though Tucker was the main man, he still let Dex be the boss of Micky. Imagine being subordinate to both a Master and the Master's other slave. Low man on the totem pole.
Aug 15, 2024
Anonymous
8/16/24, 4:28 AM
I really liked it! I definitely think you tease out the psychological stuff going on a bit. This is one of my favourite themes, where a stable relationship is completely twisted, usually against their will.

8/17/24, 12:13 AM
@Anonymous I have fun letting my dominant characters play around inside the heads of their victims. They come up with some wicked ideas.
8/16/24, 11:26 PM
And finally! After the ending for the ending of the ending; we get to the 'true' ending? Or is it just the the beginning disguised as the ending? But above all: Congratulations on what has to be the most extensive and branched story on this site. Not even NG5 can match this. Yet, I bet being 'Fate' really gives you quite a bit of freedom to explore alternatives and possibilities. Does this make 'Destiny' your consciousness? Before typing this, I read the previous comments already made. And I too mimic the same sentiment about Henry's treatment of his dad. I can recognize it as both a means of maturity and resentment. Fully realizing himself and shedding himself of his dad. While also blaming him for both the why and how of much of the past events. Even if it seems unjustified. But it makes one feel vindicated. Carl became both the failure and the sacrificial lamb. And he will just have to accept what 'is' now. Yet, it also feels like they didn't go far enough. The boys just made him into a houseboy for chores. Perhaps to be dismissive and shame him. Yet that it? If they really have such disregard for him why keep him around as him? Meaning why not just go the full distance and seal him away in rubber while there? Put him in chastity if he can't use his stick. Stow him away in their dungeon when not being useful. Though I suspect such similar things if at all will be in what comes next. Which is why I also suspect we didn't read more about some other characters such as Lee or Travis and Officer 4. As being they are all former drones. I wouldn't be surprised if Hank makes a return in whatever comes next. Because you clearly have a new 'fate' for Nick. And therefore a new 'destiny' for him to pursue. Even if unwittingly. For its seems this cult as Nick puts it, is acting as a collective in pursuit as a singular individual. And Nick is going to be the new "Tri-Hard" and/or the face for a broader association of the name. He clearly has been acting more of a typical asshole style jock this chapter. Operating in questionably grey areas. Many could say was manipulative. Yet he is being egged down a different path. Either unwittingly and/or being embracive of this new role. And that is where the greyness comes from as to the how and why with Kurt involved. Is he being made into a new Master, or being the Master on strings? Clouded by a sense of greater good while masquerading as a 'hero'? That can get pretty twisted and murky. But I suspect that's exactly the point. Just how far will Nick go?

8/16/24, 11:55 PM
@[Marik29](/user/show/10021139) Thank you, as always, for your thoughts! I appreciate them. You're right that there are even more characters (other than Lee, as mentioned elsewhere) who I left out of this part. Originally this 'epilogue' was only about 2~3k words that just wouldn't fit onto the end of the previous chapter, but as it grew to full length I ended up making the absence of those other characters stand out more than was intended. Rest assured, they're waiting in the wings for a continuation of the story from a new perspective,... As for Carl, I agree that Henry's 'punishment' for him seems half-assed given his feelings, but I would like to stress that there's something holding both boys back from giving in entirely to their desires; Sarah. It's not so much a matter of Henry simply not resenting his mom like he does his dad, nor even just wanting not to deprive her of her man. Sarah represents a danger to both Henry and Nick; she has the knowledge and awareness to see what they're doing if she becomes aware and, while she adores her boy, she could easily make life harder for Henry should she discover his misdemeanors. That's why Henry has been holding back in his treatment of Carl (Carl CAN use his cock, just not for himself or another MAN), _but,..._ that's not likely to last! These boys aren't too good at resisting temptation. Carl is sure to find the terms of his enslavement adjusted soon enough,... Now,... **Fate**. Yes, he's a sort-of self-insert character,... his little cameo with **Destiny** was just a light-hearted jab at myself for being unable to just STFU and. stop. adding. more. words! **Fate** started out earlier on as method to segue into the various Bad Ends, but here he gets to be included once more. The two of them are there to provide a nice page-break so I can take a breather before continuing the story in a new vein. Thanks again, and I look forward to exploring this world again (after a break)!
8/16/24, 10:54 PM
This is PHENOMENAL.
8/16/24, 12:29 PM
I've never liked Nick and the way he treats Henry so I'm not surprised to see his devolution into becoming a ful blown villain. Let's face it he's always had that propensity

8/16/24, 10:41 PM
@[musclejunky](/user/show/10019676) Nick definitely leans more on the villainous side of things. He acts selfishly and abuses his powers more and more as they grow. His motivations for being a hero are also pretty murky,... However, Nick just doesn't have that initial drive to leap into villainy,... at least, not yet! **Tri-Hard** was motivated towards becoming **Mister Freedom's** nemesis, Hank forced himself to take the crown from his former master and our new friend Kurt has his own reasons. Nick is someone who has all they want and need, so he doesn't have any reason to step up his villainous game. That said, the guy is an undisputed asshole and would have carried on being an utterly unlikable, yet unquestionably popular jock for the rest of his college days and beyond.
8/8/24, 9:52 PM
I’m really liking this. I’m wondering if this should also be on Cupid?

8/12/24, 8:06 PM
@[Beaner](/user/show/2654278) Thanks so much! It’s my first time posting on here, so I don’t know the system very well! I can probably add it to Cupid too?

8/16/24, 8:15 PM
@[WA Frost](/user/show/10008331) You can select additional sites to crosspost the story on in the editing menu, just under the widget where you choose the main site to post on. Given the direction this story is going in the next chapter, it should definitely be crossposted ;)

8/16/24, 9:16 PM
@[Fred W. Kong](/user/show/476663) Also, note that the setting applies to the whole series. If you activate "Cupid" (or any other site) for a chapter, this change will apply to all chapters in the series.

8/16/24, 9:19 PM
@[Corin](/user/show/125990) Noted! Added Cupid and awaiting revision confirmation
8/16/24, 8:41 PM
One word: Outstanding. That's so hot and so relatable... I'm just like Mike.
8/12/24, 9:51 PM
Another great chapter! I like that Kai and Will are getting off on watching Mikey have his way with his victims. Now that Mikey has taken control of one set of brothers, will "brothers" Kai and Will be next? Can't wait to find out.

8/14/24, 1:08 AM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) Thank you! :grin: yeah, Kai and Will are quite naughty :laughing: as for Mikey, he certainly sees the world as his oyster and those two definitely are on his menu :rofl: the next chapter is about halfway done.

8/14/24, 11:16 AM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) Must admit I do keep refreshing for the next part 😳😳😳

8/14/24, 1:56 PM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) I'm sorryyyy :sob: I'll probably have it finished today, but it will take some time to publish.

8/14/24, 3:22 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) Don’t be sorry . Everything you do is appreciated 😊

8/15/24, 2:40 AM
@[Glennyboi](/user/show/917433) :heart: :heart: there we go, the next chapter has been submitted :grin:

8/16/24, 7:30 PM
@[SleepyAsh](/user/show/10046846) Guess it takes a while for stories to be posted once they're submitted. Really looking forward to the next episode!

8/16/24, 7:53 PM
@[Profguy15](/user/show/920341) It's supposed to take up to 48 hours, since they have to make sure the story doesn't violate site rules, and with it being summer, it's understandable for it to take longer.