Recent Comments

nnnrg
5/3/16, 10:56 PM
Unlike some readers, I think this is a very good conclusion. It was about as much 'victory' as could be achieved over the crystal.
Willie Cici
5/3/16, 3:51 PM
Thanks for the comments. I'm interested to know what the readers think about the next chapter. Suggestions welcome. I'll take it from there. Thanks.
Anonymous
5/3/16, 3:49 PM
Send some uptight detective who gets dp'd for hours.
Anonymous
5/3/16, 12:13 PM
Yeah, sissy that dude up :)
Slavethruhypno@yahoo.com
5/3/16, 5:07 AM
It is good to be a puppet and letbthe puppet master pull the strings. Leather slave boy, lingerie, gang bangs...we tranced puppets are satisfied with any of them.
Anonymous
5/3/16, 1:34 AM
Omg yessss
UchihaDEMS
5/3/16, 12:58 AM
Anything but women’s lingerie, scatology or water-sports D:
5/3/16, 12:35 AM
I liked the concept of Derek being forced to change every day. Even though it's pretty horrific, there's a twisted kind of justice to it. If I may be blunt, I felt the story got a little messy around the second half, but that's fair considering it's such an old draft. It was still hot, just with a little less of your usual flair. I'm glad to see you writing again.
May 1, 2016
The Yetti
5/3/16, 12:34 AM
Love teacher MC, Excellent story
Anonymous
5/2/16, 11:13 PM
Ooohh this was fun.