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VRL
5/2/16, 1:07 PM
Im the first commenter, admittedly If he became an evil overlord permanently that wouldve been great but i like the ending nevertheless
screamingmoist
5/2/16, 1:05 PM
Thanks for reading all of them! This was the draft that's been gathering dust in my computer for six years. I polished it up as best I could, but after that long I didn't really remember where I was going with it, but didn't want to leave it hanging. I wouldn't feel too bad for Craig. He could have been fleshed out better, but I pictured him as the epitome of corporate evil. Bad person all around who's totally okay with being a bad person. This way he can't really hurt anyone else.
May 1, 2016
Anonymous
5/2/16, 12:47 PM
love it! so hot! please continue!
5/2/16, 12:36 PM
The party was wonderfully painful. I'm very interested to see where this is headed.
Anonymous
5/2/16, 11:56 AM
it's a cool story. i like where it's going... keep it up!
Anonymous
5/2/16, 9:54 AM
I still kind of feel bad for Craig. I mean, sure, he's sort of happy with his situation now, but he's basically a horny human with a dog brain now. He can't talk or stand or anything. And now he's stuck that way for the rest of his life.
cutlerfan
5/2/16, 9:31 AM
I liked the ending..no magic restoration of the previous reality. Scott is really hot as a hulk and the jerks in the stories kept their punishments. Who knows? At some point Derek may find another crystal and restore them if they have repented. Wonderful descriptions of changes and mostly happy endings with gay couples.
Anonymous
5/2/16, 8:56 AM
:)
Anonymous
5/2/16, 8:25 AM
Not to be a jerk but I was disappointed with the ending. I didn't think it fit well with the previous stories which were awesome.
May 1, 2016
Cliff
5/2/16, 7:30 AM
I smelled corruption!