Recent Comments

May 1, 2016
5/1/16, 4:45 PM
Nice. I especially liked the small signs of resistance from reality: they seem to hint at possible future complications.
EdIam
5/1/16, 3:38 PM
I've got finals this week and graduation Friday!! I can't wait to be able to sit back and relax and write about the newly twisted family!
May 1, 2016
5/1/16, 2:08 PM
Wow. Totally my kind of story. Well done! Great descriptions of everything, especially the teacher. Nice pacing as well.
Anonymous
5/1/16, 1:55 PM
Meh. Sorty but you've done better.
Anonymous
5/1/16, 11:20 AM
didnt think i would be but as i read more i began to enjoy it now OMG I am hooked i need more
Anonymous
5/1/16, 11:11 AM
hurry upwith he next part
TcomJ
5/1/16, 7:06 AM
Where is part 10?
Apr 30, 2016
Anonymous
5/1/16, 5:33 AM
What a cliffhanger!
Anonymous
5/1/16, 5:24 AM
Would have like to have seen Phil begin to enjoy it and verbalize his change of heat
Anonymous
5/1/16, 5:15 AM
I would love to see this continue!!!