Recent Comments

reflex01
4/28/16, 2:10 AM
I like where this is going! Keep up the tension between Jake's conscious and subconscious minds. Carter is delightfully fiendish.
UchihaDEMS
4/28/16, 1:11 AM
Interesting scenario... well done :)
Anonymous
4/27/16, 11:40 PM
What happened to superslut slave? All of em are gone
4/27/16, 11:32 PM
I'm intrigued where this is going, but I hope Jake remembers he could wish to learn any possible consequences of his wishing and even wish that there would be more negative side effects for him.
Anonymous
4/27/16, 10:23 PM
Great story!!! I loved it!!! That's exactly the kind of story that makes me hard. I wish there were more authors to write stories like this one. Excellent job. Thank you! Keep writing :p
Viridian
4/27/16, 6:12 PM
The above quoted sentence was what made this story for me too. So far it's an interesting beginning.
Anonymous
4/27/16, 4:00 PM
Great story!! Nice twist at the end.
Anonymous
4/27/16, 3:56 PM
The premise I thought was going to be predictable. And then comes this sentence, "This new master is interesting. He is either cautious or unimaginative or both. I shall break him of this habit." That intrigues me. Let's hope that is the key to making this story line interesting.
Apr 16, 2015
Anonymous
4/27/16, 3:24 PM
More more more.....great story
Anonymous
4/27/16, 1:49 PM
Please finish this story. It's great