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UchihaDEMS
4/28/16, 1:11 AM
Interesting scenario... well done :)
Anonymous
4/27/16, 11:40 PM
What happened to superslut slave? All of em are gone
4/27/16, 11:32 PM
I'm intrigued where this is going, but I hope Jake remembers he could wish to learn any possible consequences of his wishing and even wish that there would be more negative side effects for him.
Anonymous
4/27/16, 10:23 PM
Great story!!! I loved it!!! That's exactly the kind of story that makes me hard. I wish there were more authors to write stories like this one. Excellent job. Thank you! Keep writing :p
Viridian
4/27/16, 6:12 PM
The above quoted sentence was what made this story for me too. So far it's an interesting beginning.
Anonymous
4/27/16, 4:00 PM
Great story!! Nice twist at the end.
Anonymous
4/27/16, 3:56 PM
The premise I thought was going to be predictable. And then comes this sentence, "This new master is interesting. He is either cautious or unimaginative or both. I shall break him of this habit." That intrigues me. Let's hope that is the key to making this story line interesting.
Apr 16, 2015
Anonymous
4/27/16, 3:24 PM
More more more.....great story
Anonymous
4/27/16, 1:49 PM
Please finish this story. It's great
Anonymous
4/27/16, 9:30 AM
Okay! So this is a classic start showing great potential! I always love genie-wish story. It should be differentiated from those stories about hypnosis. It just seems that everything is till half on the way, so I have to simply wait for another chapter and chapter! Will Jake's father be Jake's first love slave? Will there be many other kinds of slaves? Like jocks, coaches, cops, soldiers, firemen, gangs from underworld... Brilliant! And also please make your works full of plots of reality shifting! Like Ollie369's "Reality He Wrote," which is a masterpiece! GO GO GO