Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/26/16, 8:39 AM
Awwwwww this is an horror story ! I usually like muscle theft stories but this one is so pointless!! I wish the main character exploded at the end... He is so awful and without any feeling... Absurd story... Stopped to be fun when he decided to go to the gym...he do these shit even to his best friend...nothing is said about how his friend is feeling afterward... There is zero psychological developpment ... Worst story I ever red
Anonymous
4/26/16, 5:25 AM
Guessing there's a real "Jake" in this writer's life.
Anonymous
4/26/16, 4:30 AM
So good
Trylithin
4/26/16, 1:34 AM
This feels like a thriller, complete with shaky can footage and unexplained disappearances. Except now it's mixed with my favorite genre - transformations. Anxiously waiting for more.
A San Francisco Reader
4/25/16, 9:33 PM
SORRY, AFTER AWHILE IT BECAME TOO MUCH & JUST GOT SILLY RATHER THAN SEXY..HO-HUM....
Anonymous
4/25/16, 5:42 PM
Hot!!! There will be another chapter? I like how you describe how stupid Jake is becoming, I love those details in a story. Maybe you could debase him publicly
Anonymous
4/25/16, 5:05 PM
ive read all of the series thats not an ebook, and yes i see the resemblance,just want to say keep writing! this is great
Anonymous
4/25/16, 3:25 PM
Can we get some formatting and clearer paragraph breaks. It's bad enough to read around the "lisp" fetish stuff (which I just don't understand), but these run on unformatted pieces are a buzz kill.
Anonymous
4/25/16, 2:34 PM
Very hot and well written.
Anonymous
4/25/16, 12:59 PM
Great story. Keep them coming.