Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/26/16, 5:25 AM
Guessing there's a real "Jake" in this writer's life.
Anonymous
4/26/16, 4:30 AM
So good
Trylithin
4/26/16, 1:34 AM
This feels like a thriller, complete with shaky can footage and unexplained disappearances. Except now it's mixed with my favorite genre - transformations. Anxiously waiting for more.
A San Francisco Reader
4/25/16, 9:33 PM
SORRY, AFTER AWHILE IT BECAME TOO MUCH & JUST GOT SILLY RATHER THAN SEXY..HO-HUM....
Anonymous
4/25/16, 5:42 PM
Hot!!! There will be another chapter? I like how you describe how stupid Jake is becoming, I love those details in a story. Maybe you could debase him publicly
Anonymous
4/25/16, 5:05 PM
ive read all of the series thats not an ebook, and yes i see the resemblance,just want to say keep writing! this is great
Anonymous
4/25/16, 3:25 PM
Can we get some formatting and clearer paragraph breaks. It's bad enough to read around the "lisp" fetish stuff (which I just don't understand), but these run on unformatted pieces are a buzz kill.
Anonymous
4/25/16, 2:34 PM
Very hot and well written.
Anonymous
4/25/16, 12:59 PM
Great story. Keep them coming.
4/25/16, 12:43 PM
A gay erotic version of "The X-Files", very intriguing.