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4/25/16, 3:17 AM
To quote someone, "that's hot!"
Tattcub
4/24/16, 10:54 PM
You blow me away. I can't and wouldn't compete with you but you are one of my inspirations. :-)
Anonymous
4/24/16, 9:20 PM
Great story!!
4/24/16, 8:38 PM
Another awesome story from you. Interesting way to do it with the split perspectives.
Anonymous
4/24/16, 8:35 PM
Great story!!! Loved it!
Anonymous
4/24/16, 8:16 PM
Spectacular
Anonymous
4/24/16, 6:52 PM
Another enjoyable chapter :) Thank you for sharing . looking forward To reading more :-)
Anonymous
4/24/16, 4:23 PM
LOVE this concept - wish there was more detail into their individual transformations, and reactions (maybe from each perspective)! Hope there is an another installment coming!
Anonymous
4/24/16, 10:47 AM
Very moving... and scary. A transformation horror story, with a lot of destroyed lives.
4/24/16, 9:45 AM
This is so good--likable characters, enough revelations and mysterious hints to create impatience for the next chapter, and a grounding in reality that makes whatever is going on here seem plausible. If the complete work were available now, I have the feeling that I would read it without stopping until I had finished it and then re-read it to make sure I hadn't missed anything.