Recent Comments

dougkent
4/24/16, 9:39 AM
yes yes yes yes please continue
Anonymous
4/24/16, 9:18 AM
How story as always. Good to see older men dominated, especially with Vern fully aware of his doing :) ‘Whatever happened to Phelan?’ My question also :D
Anonymous
4/24/16, 7:59 AM
I really really enjoyed this . Please continue :)
4/24/16, 5:48 AM
Oh, I am very excited to see where this goes. Welcome to the site!
Tattcub
4/24/16, 4:52 AM
Loved this. Keep going. I love the feel and progression of the story so far. More please.
Anonymous
4/23/16, 10:12 PM
To me this definitely has a J.K. Rowling feel, particularly with all the detail (which in Rowling's case is mostly padding). But very unlike Rowling you have a really good talent for describing arousal, lust, and desire. Go with it! I look forward to more chapters.
Anonymous
4/23/16, 10:07 PM
Painfully reminded me what a waste of time high school is for many people, with all the pointless slights and worries about who is a friend and who to avoid. Those relationships and the characters were so well drawn in this story that the actual sex seemed like a side-issue. Nice writing.
Anonymous
4/23/16, 9:31 PM
To me this has an interesting late 80s - early 90s feel and I'm wondering why. Something in the tone makes me think of anime. Also, it might be the Robert Asprinesque demon = dimensional traveler thing.
Anonymous
4/23/16, 7:19 PM
Boy, someone should illustrate this. Great setup--looking forward to meeting the rest of the class!
Anonymous
4/23/16, 5:34 PM
Amazing!