Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/24/16, 6:52 PM
Another enjoyable chapter :) Thank you for sharing . looking forward To reading more :-)
Anonymous
4/24/16, 4:23 PM
LOVE this concept - wish there was more detail into their individual transformations, and reactions (maybe from each perspective)! Hope there is an another installment coming!
Anonymous
4/24/16, 10:47 AM
Very moving... and scary. A transformation horror story, with a lot of destroyed lives.
4/24/16, 9:45 AM
This is so good--likable characters, enough revelations and mysterious hints to create impatience for the next chapter, and a grounding in reality that makes whatever is going on here seem plausible. If the complete work were available now, I have the feeling that I would read it without stopping until I had finished it and then re-read it to make sure I hadn't missed anything.
dougkent
4/24/16, 9:39 AM
yes yes yes yes please continue
Anonymous
4/24/16, 9:18 AM
How story as always. Good to see older men dominated, especially with Vern fully aware of his doing :) ‘Whatever happened to Phelan?’ My question also :D
Anonymous
4/24/16, 7:59 AM
I really really enjoyed this . Please continue :)
4/24/16, 5:48 AM
Oh, I am very excited to see where this goes. Welcome to the site!
Tattcub
4/24/16, 4:52 AM
Loved this. Keep going. I love the feel and progression of the story so far. More please.
Anonymous
4/23/16, 10:12 PM
To me this definitely has a J.K. Rowling feel, particularly with all the detail (which in Rowling's case is mostly padding). But very unlike Rowling you have a really good talent for describing arousal, lust, and desire. Go with it! I look forward to more chapters.