Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/21/16, 9:24 AM
I love you, too! EdIam!
Anonymous
4/21/16, 8:58 AM
LOVED IT. Love muscle bottom stories. There are never enough of them here.
Anonymous
4/21/16, 7:47 AM
excellent!!!
4/21/16, 5:24 AM
Great first chapter. I'm so looking forward to reading more.
Apr 20, 2016
Theodore
4/21/16, 4:12 AM
Still feel your stories lack something, Willie... Either they do not reach the climax (no pun here) or they just lack of appeal. Maybe you could try to push it further make the character more intense, or make the story line more extreme? I'm sorry if I make you sad though.
Anonymous
4/21/16, 2:46 AM
This was ridiculously good. Looking forward to a future installment. You really nailed it.
Anonymous
4/21/16, 2:35 AM
Very nice!
cutlerfan
4/21/16, 1:55 AM
Great story! I would love to read more! Loved the descriptions and characterization. Please continue!
D
4/21/16, 1:49 AM
this is awesum bro. i really liked how he changed cause of what the tv version did! i wunder if the head coach an the whole team changed too!
John Souless
4/21/16, 1:19 AM
Oh well , hopefully you'll get it done soon , your my favorite author so I'm excited to see you writing new stuff