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8/16/24, 1:49 AM
Very nice. I'd love to see this new MC mixing and matching various amounts of other love bombs. Like, Submission + Apathy makes them extremely compliant and suggestible, enough that you can give them hypnotic suggestions. Or Dominance + Submission makes them into a Powerbottom, taking what they want but in a normally more submissive position. Heck, maybe the Cure has strange effects if applied at the same time as the others, like enhancing a specific part of one of the love bomb depending in return for cancelling out the other parts.

8/16/24, 3:27 AM
@[Drawningghle](/user/show/10005957) Great idea! Very alchemist vibes wth that one. Thanks for reading!
8/16/24, 2:37 AM
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pmk
7/17/24, 3:28 PM
I know it's been years but would you ever consider coming back to this story? I'm a big fan of your work!

8/16/24, 12:05 AM
@[pmk](/user/show/976276) I'm actually planning on picking it up again soon hopefully!
8/15/24, 11:11 PM
Wow, rubbrsome, this is incredible! It has a dizzying, dreamlike quality to it that I can only sum up as an "erotic nightmare." And there are so many unanswered questions: why do the doms all look alike? Where did this carnival come from? Are the men who become slaves in the carnival trapped there forever? I know you said this is a one-and-done story, but I think you could easily continue this if you wanted to.

8/15/24, 11:25 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Where did this Carnival come from? Are the slaves trapped? Why do the doms look alike? These are all excellent questions. And I'm really glad somebody is asking them. The story's been up for a few days, and you're the first to comment on the story's setting. I will tell you that I had a definite idea of what's happening here. I put clues to the setting all throughout the story. But at the same time, I also purposely left it vague and surreal. So like a dream, the story can be ambiguous and open to interpretation. But I would encourage you to approach the story as if it's NOT a dream. While the narrator does oscillate back and forth between dream and reality, he definitely (at the story's conclusion states that it's not a dream. So, if the story is not a dream, I would really like you tell me what you think is going on here? I really don't want to publicly share my interpretation. If I did, then I think it would limit the story. And the story could be much more fun if guys let their imaginations go wild, share their theories and answer those question you asked.
8/12/24, 9:28 AM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) I had a feeling this might be your story. I'm a bit proud that I guessed correctly.

8/15/24, 11:09 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) :smirk:
Anonymous
8/9/24, 2:44 PM
Dang, I was really looking forward to seeing our himbo get brainfucked by our new daddy. That said, I absolutely love this series so far!

8/15/24, 11:08 PM
@Anonymous It's a branching story! Plenty of routes will feature Manuel.
Anonymous
8/9/24, 9:42 PM
This is just a tour de force. Nothing on the site has compared to this chapter

8/15/24, 11:07 PM
@Anonymous Oh wow, thanks! This story isn't dead, but glad you liked this chapter so much.
8/11/24, 2:18 PM
Seeing this posted was a fantastic surprise Sunday morning. Definitely has me excited to read more. Either option sounds hot, but changing their jobs to easy going life guards might keep them there, or at least, keep them near enough to Oliver to fuck him, which would be satisfying. Seeing the changes Oliver made having affected both of them would be hot. Is it an Eiffel Tower that got mentioned in one of your previous stories? That with Remy and his dad with Oliver in the middle would be hot. And both of them being insatiable and wearing Oliver out. Unfortunately, Remy won’t leave until he’s got the Chronivac back and his dad will know he has it, so, after thinking that through, the office/location change might be better. Because then Oliver can still make changes. And now I’m wondering how Remy would keep it. If it fell out while Remy was getting blown by Oliver and his dad was fucking Oliver, Remy could probably pull out of Oliver faster, get the device and lock himself in the office and make his dad be at his office. That would buy him time, then he could make a copy of the device for his dad and make his dad forget. Then he could continue fucking with Oliver, including getting Jimmy or Oliver’s other son to come over and have them both slobbering over his big nuts and cock :)

8/15/24, 11:05 PM
@[MonsterMash62](/user/show/3332) I always appreciate your in-depth comments! This is a branched series, so lots of potential scenarios will happen.
8/15/24, 11:04 PM
Glad people liked this one! I have plans to continue, just got put on the back burner since I could publish anything during voting.
8/15/24, 4:21 PM
Super hot!!!!

8/15/24, 10:13 PM
@[BobbyBlobfish](/user/show/700733) Thank you!! :3 glad you like it!