Recent Comments

Anonymous
4/12/16, 6:31 AM
Pretty rough stereotypes and enough bad spelling/word choice to be a turn off.
Titan
4/12/16, 5:22 AM
Great start. Love it.
Kylr79
4/12/16, 5:19 AM
That was so hot. I hope you continue the story.
Anonymous
4/12/16, 5:10 AM
very good story...do not take into account the first comment...obviously from a very "vanilla sex" minded person.... I don't see that as particularly disgusting...I red many stories WAY more shocking on the internet!!
Anonymous
4/12/16, 4:38 AM
I disagree with the previous comment the throwing up is the guy being remade all the waist of what is being taken away from him is being expelled. Can't wait for the next chapter on what happens.
Anonymous
4/12/16, 3:41 AM
Interesting, if a bit stereotyped. For me, all the vomiting and the stuff which the lady throws up into the guy's mouth (making it sound more like feces than vomit) is way, way too disgusting, removing one from the story, the rest of which is never able to compensate. The whole thing leaves a bad taste...
Anonymous
4/12/16, 3:12 AM
Agreed can't wait for alan's full transition
Anonymous
4/12/16, 3:02 AM
Super hot! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Anonymous
4/12/16, 1:55 AM
Wonderful!!! (as always!) Look forward to the next chapter!
Anonymous
4/11/16, 11:29 PM
Love it! Keep going.