Recent Comments

8/16/24, 9:49 AM
Congrats on finishing what I'm sure must be one of, if not, the longest collective work on the site. This story would seriously have to be pushing full-blown novel status. And what an ending it was. Personally, I was hoping we'd get to see more of Lee in this final chapter. Explore his time in the Super Defense Force, finding out about the source of the serum that grants his powers and restoring his relationships with Henry and Nick, maybe even falling under Nick's influence and getting sucked into their sordid world. But alas it was obviously not meant to be. Still very happy to see Henry and Nick get their own, slightly twisted, form of a happily ever after. Can't wait to see what you come up with for your next narrative foray.

8/16/24, 10:20 AM
@[phillipsm](/user/show/919402) Thank you very much, I'm glad you enjoyed the story and the ending! Sorry for the rather limited amount of Lee in the conclusion, especially when he is set to be facing a host of experiences,... but that's because any continuation of the story will be based around the **Super Defense Force** and I was a little conservative in treading on ground I might want to leave for later. Of course, as the ending became more,... _lengthy,..._ Lee's absence became more notable. I hope to make up for this when I do return to this setting!
Anonymous
8/16/24, 3:23 AM
I like Ben as being a nice caring friend more than him being mean.

8/16/24, 9:17 AM
@Anonymous I agree, I enjoy writing some humanity into him. Makes it a bit more realistic to if an everyday person got access to this hidden power.
Anonymous
8/16/24, 8:47 AM
Time to reread this series
8/16/24, 5:14 AM
Glad there's finally more to this story! It's definitely a hot idea
8/16/24, 5:03 AM
I'll second eveningwill's comment that more popup notifications would be nice. GH ID 1292865
8/16/24, 1:49 AM
Very nice. I'd love to see this new MC mixing and matching various amounts of other love bombs. Like, Submission + Apathy makes them extremely compliant and suggestible, enough that you can give them hypnotic suggestions. Or Dominance + Submission makes them into a Powerbottom, taking what they want but in a normally more submissive position. Heck, maybe the Cure has strange effects if applied at the same time as the others, like enhancing a specific part of one of the love bomb depending in return for cancelling out the other parts.

8/16/24, 3:27 AM
@[Drawningghle](/user/show/10005957) Great idea! Very alchemist vibes wth that one. Thanks for reading!
8/16/24, 2:37 AM
If you enjoy this story, please consider [supporting me on Ko-Fi](https://ko-fi.com/post/August-2024-Release-Schedule-C1C011CALG).
pmk
7/17/24, 3:28 PM
I know it's been years but would you ever consider coming back to this story? I'm a big fan of your work!

8/16/24, 12:05 AM
@[pmk](/user/show/976276) I'm actually planning on picking it up again soon hopefully!
8/15/24, 11:11 PM
Wow, rubbrsome, this is incredible! It has a dizzying, dreamlike quality to it that I can only sum up as an "erotic nightmare." And there are so many unanswered questions: why do the doms all look alike? Where did this carnival come from? Are the men who become slaves in the carnival trapped there forever? I know you said this is a one-and-done story, but I think you could easily continue this if you wanted to.

8/15/24, 11:25 PM
@[ParadoxBear](/user/show/10002417) Where did this Carnival come from? Are the slaves trapped? Why do the doms look alike? These are all excellent questions. And I'm really glad somebody is asking them. The story's been up for a few days, and you're the first to comment on the story's setting. I will tell you that I had a definite idea of what's happening here. I put clues to the setting all throughout the story. But at the same time, I also purposely left it vague and surreal. So like a dream, the story can be ambiguous and open to interpretation. But I would encourage you to approach the story as if it's NOT a dream. While the narrator does oscillate back and forth between dream and reality, he definitely (at the story's conclusion states that it's not a dream. So, if the story is not a dream, I would really like you tell me what you think is going on here? I really don't want to publicly share my interpretation. If I did, then I think it would limit the story. And the story could be much more fun if guys let their imaginations go wild, share their theories and answer those question you asked.
8/12/24, 9:28 AM
@[bluesuedewho](/user/show/1225367) I had a feeling this might be your story. I'm a bit proud that I guessed correctly.

8/15/24, 11:09 PM
@[Reader](/user/show/780823) :smirk: